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11-07-2013, 07:08 PM

Jack v Sebastian for Spar



Round 1
Sebastian:


Work on your attack, for starters you said he would pounce to the left and then throw himself into Jack?s side. He didn?t move forward during this? Also.. where on Jack?s side is he aiming, with what part of his own body is he planning to attack? Head, shoulder, hip?



Jack:


?If this retaliation of attack made its mark, then the rugged beast would then attempt to bite the black beasts right leg thigh and grip it to either hold him down and prevent him from moving too much, or pain him so that his movements were hindered.? Try to avoid if, then attacks as they can throw off the timeline of a fight post. Instead, see if you can apply simultaneous attacks with multiple body parts.

Just a note, if he?s reaching out to bite Sebastian?s leg, it would be difficult for him to keep his chin tucked ? make sure your defenses coincide with your movements.

Round 2

Sebastian:


Where did he slam into Jack? What body part hit Jack? Which of Jack?s body parts hit him? Where did Jack?s jaws graze him? What damage did they leave behind? Two cuts, four?

He began to circle. That?s powerplaying. You can?t have him get away from Jack without attempting to do so. Not to mention when he does launch an attack, you didn?t give any directions, lefts, rights, or angles.


Catch his hind legs. Both of them? Where at? The paws, mid leg, at the bend? ?If he managed to dodge that, he would twist and try to slam into his side and wind him.? Like I told Dragon, don?t do if, then attacks.


Jack:


Not bad here.



Fight Defaulted to Jack


- By [Andy]