SEVEN NATION ARMY
11-22-2013, 08:00 PM
demonio v argent for partial maim Round One
demonio ? clarity ? 8 out of 10 ; ?At the same time his skull would snap around to the right, ivory jaws agape in an attempt to hook his upper canines into the woman's right eye?? argent?s right eye is completely on the other side that demonio?s jaws target if he?s charging her head-on. perspective is key. powerplay ? 9 out of 10 ; there was no attempt to close the distance between demonio and argent as there should have been. it was assumed that he was successful in doing so, yet there is a possibility that someone could intercept him and therefore you must make it an attempt. defenses ? 9 out of 10 ; ears pinned, eyes narrowed, chin tucked, tail out, shoulders rolled, toes splayed, claws gripping earth, weight evenly distributed, knees bent. attack ? 6 out of 10 ; seeking to slam shoulder into argent?s chest (+2), seeking to bite argent?s right eye to blind her (+4) injuries ? 10 out of 10 ; first round. demonio round one total ? 42 out of 50 argent ? clarity ? 7 out of 10 ; ?To pin his foot down and move his shoulder in the opposite direction, potentially bringing damage to the area.? this didn?t make much sense to me. I wasn?t sure what you meant by ?the opposite direction? nor what damage argent was attempting to inflict upon demonio with this attack. powerplay ? 8 out of 10 ; ?Meanwhile, him moving away from her impact?? demonio didn?t even respond to her attack ? do not assume this is what he would do. defenses ? 10 out of 10 ; limbs spread evenly apart, weight evenly distributed, limbs bent to lower center of gravity, toes splayed, claws gripping earth, tail out, shoulders rolled, hackles raised, head lowered, neck scrunched, chin tucked, jaws agape, eyes narrowed, ears pinned. attack ? 8 out of 10 ; seeking to bite demonio?s left eye to blind him (+4), left paw seeking to slam down onto demonio?s left paw to pin his paw to the earth (+2), seeking to slam her left shoulder into demonio?s left shoulder(+2) injuries ? 10 out of 10 ; first round, moderate lacerations to left cheek. argent round one total ? 43 out of 50 Round Two
demonio ? clarity ? 4 out of 10 ; if demonio is trying to force argent?s head down, I don?t think it?s realistic for him to be able to land his bite as he intended to unless he ducked, esp since argent is dem?s height. ??right forelimb coming up to push down beside her shoulder blades?? argent is to the left of demonio, therefore, this attack was unrealistic. ??though he would quickly compensate by throwing his left leg back to readjust his balance.? this doesn?t make much sense if demonio is raising himself, for wolves don?t just step backwards on two feet like a human could. powerplay ? 7 out of 10 ; ??catch the first few joints of his toes before he was able to pull his paw free to lift himself up.? this should have been an attempt, as argent succeeded in her attack and that was her intention: to trap his paw. ??right forelimb coming up to push down beside her shoulder blades?? you can?t just assume demonio was able to do this; this needs to be made an attempt. defenses ? 7 out of 10 ; toes splayed, claws digging into earth, tail out, jaws agape, shoulders rolled, eyes narrowed, ears pinned. attack ? 6 out of 10 ; attempt to slam left forelimb onto argent?s muzzle (+2), seeking to bite argent?s left eye to blind her (+4) injuries ? 6 out of 10 ; shallow scratches to left cheek (-1), broken toes in left forepaw (-2), moderate bruising to left shoulder (-1) round two demonio total ? 30 out of 50 argent ? clarity ? 7 out of 10 ; ?Meanwhile his own right paw grazed her chest instead of her head, due to the fact that she?d raised up.? slight confusion here; demonio?s left paw had been aimed to slam down onto argent?s head, not his right. ?Her jaws desired to delve into his eye?? it should have been specified as to which eye argent was targeting. powerplay ? 10 out of 10 ; nothing of note. defenses ? 10 out of 10 ; limbs spread evenly apart, weight evenly distributed, limbs bent to lower center of gravity, toes splayed, claws digging into earth, tail out, hackles raised, shoulders rolled, head lowered, neck scrunched, chin tucked, jaws agape, eyes narrowed, ears pinned. attack ? 6 out of 10 ; aiming to thrust her left paw into demonio?s mouth to angle his head down and keep him from biting her eye (+2), seeking to bite demonio?s eye to blind him (+4) injuries ? 10 out of 10 ; pending damage from counter attack, nothing else of note. round two argent total ? 43 out of 50 Totals
demonio ? 72 out of 100 argent ? 86 out of 100 And the winner is...
argent! demonio must give up by either submitting, passing out, or fleeing, and may no longer participate in this siege. because this was a fight for blinding in one eye, demonio is now blinded in one of his eyes (wolf gets to choose since argent did not specify which eye she attacked in her last post). argent may not knock any more wolves out since she has reached her maximum of five.Damage
demonio - permanently blinded in one eye, broken toes in left forepaw (will take 2 ooc weeks to heal), shallow scratches beneath left eye (will take two ooc days to heal)argent ? fractured toes in left forepaw (will take 10 ooc days to heal), moderate lacerations to left cheek (will take four ooc days to heal) Notes
wolfeyez ? you did well in this fight; however, you do need to pay more attention to realism, for that is what negatively impacted your score most.muse ? you also did well and should pay more attention to specifics, i.e. with the targets of your attacks. great job to the both of you! c: sorry i don't have much to say in the notes section but that's probably a good thing, no? |
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