War Pigs
12-07-2013, 02:09 PM
Vyvienne v Sevan for Dominance/Punishment Round 1
VYVIENNE: 10 for clarity- good 10 for powerplaying. nothing of note 10 for defenses. muscles tensed, hackles raised, jaws parted, teeth bared, eyes narrowed, ears pinned, body lowered 10 for attack. slam her right shoulder behind the girl?s left shoulder (+3), right paw lifted to pin Sevan?s left (+3), these two done simultaneously in order to stress the other shoulder (+2), jaws snapping for Sevan?s left ear (+2) 10 for injuries.First round Round one Vyvienne Total: 50/50 SEVAN: 10 for clarity- Notes 10 for powerplaying. Notes 6 for defenses. lips curled back, ears back, eyes narrowing, hackles raised 3 for attack. Biting at the right side of Vyvienne?s face (+3), rearing to free her paw (not an actual attack, +0) 10 for injuries.First round Round one Sevan Total: 39/50 Round 2
Vyvienne 8 for clarity- The last paragraph had a bit of confusion in it, mostly from sentence structure, not a big issue though. 10 for powerplaying. Notes 10 for defenses. muscles tense, hackles raised, jaws parted and lips peeled back, eyes narrowed, ears pinned, body lowered closer to the ground for a better center of balance. (+10) 6 for attack. Barrel her weight into Sevan to knock her over while rearing (+3), seeking the flesh of her sister?s scruff in order to yank it back awkwardly and painfully (+3) 7 for injuries. Moderate punctures on left cheek (-3) Round two Vyvienne Total: 41/50 Sevan: 8 for clarity- A few grammatical issues in there. 10 for powerplaying. Notes 10 for defenses. eyes narrowed, ears flat against her skull, hackles raised, her legs spread out equally and bent slightly, her tail even with her spine. 3 for attack. Grabbing at her sister?s foreleg in attempt to keep from having her neck wrenched (+3) 3 for injuries. Toes broken (-4), skull scratches (-1), bite wound to scruff (-2) Round two Sevan Total: 34/50 Totals:
Vyvienne: 91/100 Sevan: 73/100 And the winner is...
Vyvienne! Sevan must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
Vyvienne- Slight scarring on left cheek due to the punctures, mild swelling will be present for 2 OOC days, complete healing (minus scarring) will occur in 5 OOC days. Sevan- Broken toes will cause a moderate limp for 5 OOC days, after which it will reduce to only a sporadic limp only seen during overexhaustion. Bite wound to scruff will swell, but will heal in approximately 4 OOC days. Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) Notes For Muse Good fight, nothing really to say. For SAF Make sure you do multiple attacks, that?s what really hurt your score. - By [Andy]
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