YOUR SOUL IS MINE
01-29-2014, 03:01 PM
Codeine v Deyva for Dominance Round 1
codeine: 10 for clarity- clear post, -0 10 for powerplaying- none, actions were attempts, -0 8 for defenses- adding some defenses during the attack would have bumped up your score, -2 10 for attack- good starting attack, -0 0 for injuries-First round, -10 Round one codeine Total: 38/50 deyva: 10 for clarity- clear post, -0 10 for powerplaying- none, all attempts, -0 7 for defenses- few more defenses would have bumped it up, -3 10 for attack- good counter attack, -0 0 for injuries- First round, -10 round one deyva Total: 37/50 Round 2
codeine: 8 for clarity- I had to reread certain parts a few times to understand it, -2 10 for powerplaying- none, -0 10 for defenses- good defenses, -0 10 for attack- good counters, -0 10 for injuries- accurate injuries, -0 Round two codeine Total: 48/50 deyva: 8 for clarity- I had to reread a few sentences to understand it, -2 7 for powerplaying. In Codeine's post it states "while her head was somewhat awkwardly angled to bite at his left leg" so i do not see how she would have the time to move her body out of the way to avoid his paw as she is going for the bite, -3 7 for defenses. more defenses needed, -3 10 for attack. good counter, points taken in powerplaying for movement, -0 10 for injuries. accurate injuries, -0 Round two deyva Total: 42/50 Round 3
codeine: 10 for clarity- clear post, -0 10 for powerplaying. none, -0 10 for defenses. good defenses, -0 10 for attack. good attacks, -0 5 for injuries. I feel like her pulling should have disrupted his footing more than it had, -5 Round three codeine Total: 45/50 deyva: 10 for clarity- no clarity issues, -0 10 for powerplaying. none, -0 10 for defenses. good defenses, -0 10 for attack. good attack, -0 10 for injuries. accurate injuries, -0 Round three deyva Total: 50/50 Totals:
codeine: 131/150 deyva: 129/150 And the winner is...
codeine! deyva must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
codeine- half inch lacerations near the upper part of his left foreleg, will cause a limp for one OOC week, will heal in one OOC week. He may counter deyva's attack since he is the victor. deyva- Bite marks to scruff, torn right ear, bite above left eye that causes temporary blindness until treated. All bleeding, will take one OOC week to heal. Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) For Serendipity Pretty easy to keep up with, just watch for those small errors. For SecretAffair Same to you darling, watch for those little errors that bring your score down. -This fight was super easy to judge, thanks guys! And i apologize for the wait. By [Aislyn]
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