Albatross
03-06-2014, 06:41 PM
(This post was last modified: 03-06-2014, 07:13 PM by Tahlia.)
Hello. c: Welcome back to Ala!
I took a peek at your profile, and there were a few points that needed addressing.
First, you list your character's name as being "Albatross" while her account name reads "Albatrossa." I'm assuming it's meant to be Albatross, but I wanted to double check with you. I can edit the account name if need be.
Also, you list no alignment on her profile. There is a list of alignments and their descriptions in the guidebook for you to review and decide on one for her. c:
Last thing, we have a minimum word requirement on personalities of 150 words which hers does not meet. It is 10 words short. Another sentence or a few words added should remedy this.
Once these things have been addressed she will be ready for acceptance. ^^
EDIT: In second look, I think you may have updated appearance instead of personality? s: I'm still getting 140 words for it, I'm afraid.
I took a peek at your profile, and there were a few points that needed addressing.
First, you list your character's name as being "Albatross" while her account name reads "Albatrossa." I'm assuming it's meant to be Albatross, but I wanted to double check with you. I can edit the account name if need be.
Also, you list no alignment on her profile. There is a list of alignments and their descriptions in the guidebook for you to review and decide on one for her. c:
Last thing, we have a minimum word requirement on personalities of 150 words which hers does not meet. It is 10 words short. Another sentence or a few words added should remedy this.
Once these things have been addressed she will be ready for acceptance. ^^
EDIT: In second look, I think you may have updated appearance instead of personality? s: I'm still getting 140 words for it, I'm afraid.