Gather the beasts of Hell
03-19-2014, 07:41 AM
RAVAGE v ESPERANZA v SIN for MAIM Round 1
RAVAGE: 10 for clarity- Very clear and concise, intentions well displayed, directions and sides well written. 10 for powerplaying. All moves attempted, nothing assumed. Attacks are logical and easy to understand. 10 for defenses. Shoulders angled, Tail level, Gravity adjusted, Splayed toes, Talons gripping, Eyes narrowed, Ears pinned, Teeth bared, Chin tucked, Abdomen tight, Hackles raised, Legs spread. 4 for attack. Bite attempt at flesh where leg hinges to hip (+3) Attempt to off balance (+1) 10 for injuries.First round Round one RAVAGE Total: 44/50 ESPERANZA: 5 for clarity- Lacking detail; Did not meet minimum post length requirement, being only three sentences long (-3) 2 for powerplaying. Assumed the attack on the ear had landed (-5) Assumed that she had knocked Ravage prone (?Before the female whom she had attacked would get up?) (-3) 1 for defenses. Positioning 0 for attack. Vague attack, lacking detail, while entire attack was powerplayed. 10 for injuries.First round Round one ESPERANZA Total: 18/50 Round 2
RAVAGE: 10 for clarity- Directions and intentions well displayed. All attacks are attempted, wording is clear, no major grammatical errors. 10 for powerplaying. Attacks are all attempted and realistic. 10 for defenses. Ears pinned, Jaws open, Chin tucked, Eyes narrowed, Legs bent, Body lowered, Tail out for balance, Shoulders guarding, Hackles up, Toes splayed, Claws used as anchors, Legs spread. 7 for attack. Attempt to grab (+2) Attempt to maim eye (+5)< br> 3 for injuries. Moderate wounds to ear and scalp (-3) Round two RAVAGE Total: 40/50 ESPERANZA: 7 for clarity- Sparse in detail. Sides, angles, vantage points not noted (-3)) 0 for powerplaying. ?Latched her teeth around the fae's neck? (-5) ?...Push into Ravage's side, knocking her off balance? (-3) ?Her teeth had dug deep into the smoke colored wolf's neck as crimson could be seen? (-2) 2 for defenses. Paws braced, Positioning 1 for attack. (+1) Given for attempt, yet all attacks were powerplayed< br> 7 for injuries. Moderate wound on her hind leg (-3) Round two ESPERANZA Total: 17/50 Round 3
SIN: 10 for clarity- Very clear, angles and sides well displayed, great details. 10 for powerplaying.All attacks attempted, none assumed. Attacks are logical and within bounds of reality. 9 for defenses. Ears pinned, Jaws wide, Eyes narrowed, Tail aligned, Chin tucked, Shoulders forward, Scruff bunched, Weight distributed, Toes splayed. 5 for attack. Charge for hindquarters (+2) Bite aimed for Spine (+3)< br> 10 for injuries. First round for Sin Round three SIN Total:44/50 Totals:
Ravage (Averaged): 42/50 Esperanza (Averaged): 18/50 Sin:44/50 And the the first to be eliminated is...
Esperanza! Esperanza has been knocked out! The fight will continue between Sin and Ravage! Damage:
Ravage- Moderate wounds to scalp Esperanza- Moderate damage to hind leg Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) It is important to know where powerplaying comes into a fight, and what constitutes as such. To give but a few examples, any attack made that lands damage without the other player's consent, moves that are unreasonable, or any effort to unreasonably control the tide of the fight will receive point deductions. - By [Fox]
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