Never Bow Down
03-23-2014, 09:40 AM
DAEGMAR v LOKI for SPAR Round 1
DAEGMAR: 9 for clarity- which way did she turn her head to grab his elbow? (-1) 8 for powerplaying. You need to write in an attempt with the attack using her left shoulder (-2) 10 for defenses. hackles raised, shoulders rolled, neck scrunched, head tilted down, jaws agape, stance widened, leg muscles tightened, tail down, ears tight, toes splayed 5 for attack. bite to foreleg (+3), pushing into with her shoulder(+2), 10 for injuries.First round Round one DAEGMAR Total: 42/50 LOKI: 9 for clarity- which side of his head did she hit with her shoulder? (-1) 7 for powerplaying. The ground probably isn't slick enough for him to slide unless it's raining (-2), he's a bit bigger than daegmar, he wouldn't fut underneath her (-1) 6 for defenses. ears pinned, eyes narrowed, fur bristled, weight gathered to spring, claws digging into soil, weight evenly spread, 6 for attack. bite to right hindleg(+3), pushing up with his shoulders (+2) 10 for injuries.First round Round one LOKI Total: 37//50 Round 2
DAEGMAR: 10 for clarity- a clear post 7 for powerplaying. how deep are the wounds to her foot? (-2), a lot of movement (-1) 7 for defenses. shoulders rolled, tail positioned for balance, hind limbs ready to spring, legs tense, toes splayed, ears pinned, hackles raised, 4 for attack. bite to right hind leg (+3), attempt to trip with her foreleg (+1) 8 for injuries. shallow wound to hind foot (-2), minor bruising to shoulders and hips (self inflicted) Round two DAEGMAR Total: 36/50 LOKI: 10 for clarity- a clear post 6 for powerplaying. wolves aren't flexible enough to pivot so quickly (-2), not enough damage taken (-2) 3 for defenses. ears pinned, eyes narrowed, teeth bared, 4 for attack. left paw thrown over opponent (+1), bite to skull (+3) 8 for injuries. clipped ankle (-2), Round two LOKI Total: 31/50 Totals:
DAEGMAR: 78/100 LOKI: 68/100 And the winner is...
DAEGMAR! Loki must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
DAEGMAR- no lasting damage done LOKI- no lasting damage done Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) Both of you did well! I like the creative attacks - it was a very interesting fight to read. Remember to add in all of your defenses in every post, and always clarify your injuries to the 't' (how deep, how much blood, how long, ect.) - By [Serendipity]
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