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03-24-2014, 04:46 PM

QANIK v HINGE for REASON



Round 1
QANIK :

10 for clarity- Clear post

8 for powerplaying. Minor powerplay

8 for defenses. 8 viable defences

5 for attack. +3 Bite, +2 Shoulder shove

10 for injuries.First round

Round one QANIK Total: 41/50


HINGE:

8 for clarity- Mostly clear

6 for powerplaying. Some powerplaying

5 for defenses. 5 viable defences

5 for attack. +3 Bite attack, +2 Paws

10 for injuries.First round

Round one HINGE Total: 36/50

Round 2

QANIK:

8 for clarity- Almost completely clear

8 for powerplaying. Minor powerplay

4 for defenses. 4 viable defences

10 for attack. +1 left paw, +1 right paw, +2 chest to shoulder, +6 bite to scruff, vitally behind skull.

5 for injuries. -3 bites, -2 bruising

Round two QANIK Total: 35/50


HINGE:

8 for clarity- Mostly clear but a few details missing.

6 for powerplaying. Q few cases of powerplay

3 for defenses. 3 Viable defences

8 for attack. +4 bite to already injured area. Shove +2 Push against chest +2

5 for injuries. -3 Bite wounds, -2 bruising to shoulder

Round two HINGE Total: 30/50



Totals:


QANIK: 76/100

HINGE: 66/100



And the winner is...


Qanik! Hinge must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out.

Damage:


Qanik:- Thin scarring where bitten on ribs, will take one ooc week to heal. Minimal bruising to ribs and shoulder. Will take 3 ooc days to heal.


Hinge- Bite wounds will have minimal scarring and take one ooc week to heal. Bruising tk ribs will take 3 ooc days to heal. Scars will remain in scruff and skull wounds.


Notes:



Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here)
Notes

It was a good fight with very interesting moves and tactics.


- By [Rina]