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Valar Dohaeris Queen Raisa



Elsa


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03-25-2014, 07:54 PM
Please pretend the speech is all first person. I took teh dream from the mental thread and pasted it in and it is in 3rd person....


Elsa

Elsa took a deep breathe and kept her face covered as Raisa started to go on about how that didn't make her incapable. Raisa had never seen her break down. She'd never seen the effects and she knew nothing about the nightmares. They were too terrifying to relive but Elsa would do anything that her queen asked of her. "I-In one of t-th-them... "Elsa stood there prime and fit before the court from her former pack. She could see the distained look in their eyes and she knew exactly what it was about. "You need to learn to control yourself Elsa." Her father had told her in a stern voice. She was just 4 months old, she knew little of control and no wolf seemed to stick around to aid her. But suddenly, the floor fell out from underneath her and she stood there along the lake in a harsh winter that was beyond anything she had ever seen. There she stood as she saw the rest of Ebony cowering in fear. Elsa was confused, she had never done anything to strike such behavior in the wolves around her. Especially nothing to make them all look at her like she was a monster. Where was Raisa? She could talk them out of the silliness they had gone under. It was then that she noticed what they were all scared about. Raisa was a frozen statue sitting on the ice that coated the once cooling water source. She had frozen and killed Raisa. "No!" She cried out in horror of what she had done. "NO! Nonononono. This couldn't have happened. I can't do this. I'm not cursed. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" and then the wolves s-started to chase me and I h-had to run from the Ebony w-wolv-wolves." She stuttered out as she kept her eyes covered.