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04-08-2014, 03:58 PM

Kaneyna v Narfi for Duchess



Round 1
Kaneyna:

8 for clarity- Notes

9 for powerplaying. watch your if, then statements.. that really limits what the other player can do

5 for defenses. 5 valid defenses, +1 point each

5 for attack. +2 paw shove, +3 bite attempt

10 for injuries.First round

Round one Kaneyna Total: 37/50


Narfi:

10 for clarity-

7 for powerplaying. The two bites in this single post seemed like too much movement

8 for defenses. 8 valid defenses, +1 point each

8 for attack. +3 bite, +2 shove, +3 bite

10 for injuries.First round

Round one Narfi Total: 43/50

Round 2

Kaneyna:

10 for clarity- Notes

10 for powerplaying. Notes

5 for defenses. 5 valid defenses, +1 point each

5 for attack. +2 shove, +3 bite

8 for injuries. 2 bite wounds

Round two Kaneyna Total: 38/50


Narfi:

10 for clarity- Notes

9 for powerplaying. mild wording

3 for defenses. only found 3, +1 point each

5 for attack. +3 bite, +2 tightening hold with limbs

8 for injuries. Notes

Round two Narfi Total: 35/50




Totals:


Kaneyna: 75/100

Narfi: 78/100



And the winner is...


Narfi! Kaneyna must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out.

Damage:


Kaneyna- All should heal in 5 IC days.


Narfi- All should heal in 5 IC days.


Notes:



Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here)
Good job guys, close fight!


- By [Andy]