Morning Stretch
04-11-2014, 02:33 PM
CHRYSANTHE v ALPINE for SPAR Round 1
NAME: Chrysanthe 10 for clarity- 10 for powerplaying. 10 for defenses. 8 for attack. using her weight when colliding head on (+2), attempted bite on the side of his neck(+4), moving to swipe at his left leg to throw him off balance(+2) 10 for injuries.First round Round one Chrysanthe Total: 48/50 NAME: Alpine 10 for clarity- 10 for powerplaying. 5 for defenses. low to the ground (+1), weight evenly distributed (+1), claws digging into the ground (+1), ears pinned (+1), using his head in an attempt to deflect bite to the neck (+1) 4 for attack. using his weight to shove Chrysanthe (+2), attempt to smack her muzzle with his head (+2) 10 for injuries.First round Round one Alpine Total: 37/50 Round 2
CHRYSANTHE: 9 for clarity- some grammatical issues, some possible key words left out 10 for powerplaying. 9 for defenses. hackles lifted (+1), muscles tight (+1), shoulders scrunched forward (+1), eyes narrowed (+1), ears pinned (+1), stomach clenched +1), toes splayed (+1), back legs squared (+1), jaws open for attack (+1) 4 for attack. attempting to grab a hold of his left leg (+2), biting at the his throat (+2) 8 for injuries. bruising to the chest (-2) Round two Chrysanthe Total: 31/50 ALPINE: 10 for clarity- 10 for powerplaying. 3 for defenses. weight spread (+1), body low to the ground (+1), claws gripping the ground (+1) 4 for attack. attempting to grab a hold of the ankle (+2), attempting to pull the same limb forward (+2) 8 for injuries. Bruising the chest/shoulder (-2) Round two Alpine Total: 35/50 Totals:
CHRYSANTHE: 69/100 ALPINE: 63/100 And the winner is...
CHRYSANTHE! ALPINE must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
CHRYSANTHE- Bruising to the chest/shoulder area, will heal in 5 ooc days ALPINE- Bruising to his shoulder, will heal in 5 ooc days Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) Notes For Chrysanthe Just a few grammatical issues that made parts a little confusing, but otherwise you?re defenses were great and so were your attacks☺ For Alpine Be sure to include as many defenses as possible, you used some good attacks, but don?t be afraid to really go after your opponent even if it?s a friendly spar☺ - By [Saffie]
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