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04-12-2014, 07:36 AM
Kyarst v Lysis for Training/spar Round 1
Lysis: 8 for clarity- -2, how did she try to push him down eg- by ramming into him? 10 for powerplaying. None seen 2 for defenses. +1 for each given 5 for attack. +3 for trying to grab shoulder. +2 for trying to push him to the ground. 10 for injuries.First round Round one Lysis Total: 35/50 Kyarst: 10 for clarity- Easy to read 10 for powerplaying. None found 3 for defenses. +1 for each found 3 for attack. Attempting to nip/ rake his teeth along her muzzle 9 for injuries.Small nip on shoulder Round one Kyarst Total: 35/50 Round 2
Lysis: 8 for clarity- Which forepaw did she try to get? 10 for powerplaying. none found 2 for defenses. +1 for each one seen 2 for attack. +1 for trying to hold further on his shoulder +1 for aiming to nip 9 for injuries. minor Round two Lysis Total: 31/50 Kyarst: 10 for clarity- clear 10 for powerplaying. none seen 2 for defenses. +1 for each seen 3 for attack. +3 for trying to bite down on scruff 9 for injuries. NIp to paw. Round two Kyarst Total: 34/50 Round 3
Lysis: 8 for clarity- Which limb did she try to grab? left or right. 10 for powerplaying. clear 1 for defenses. +1 for using tail for balance. 3 for attack. +3 for aiming to bite his Limb 7 for injuries. -3 Hold on scruff Round three Lysis Total: 29/50 Kyarst: 10 for clarity- Easy to read 10 for powerplaying. none seen 0 for defenses. None stated. 4 for attack. +1 for staying hold of scruff. +3 for attempting to control wolf 7 for injuries. -3 for bite to limb Round three Kyarst Total: 31/50 Totals:
Lysis: 95/150 Kyarst: 100/150 And the winner is...
Kyarst! Lysis must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
Lysis- Small nip on muzzle, will take a few days to heal. Firm bite/hold on scruff will take 4 ooc days to heal. Kyarst- Small bite to limb will take 1 ooc week to heal, bite to paw will take 3 ooc days. Small nip to shoulder will take 2 ooc days to heal Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) Great fight Easy to read and follow, quick to judge! For Nyx I really enjoyed reading this, she didnt have much training and that showed! Some ic training is all thats needed for development For Andy Make sure to include at least a few defenses, in the last round i detected none! Great fight - By [Luisiana]
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