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05-14-2014, 01:00 PM
Roman v August for Practise Round 1
Roman: 8 for clarity- -2, where abouts on the side of his neck did she aim to grab, the upper part, lower? 4 for powerplaying. -2 ?loping towards him to close the distance? You cant just assume she closed the distance, you need to put an attempt. -2 ? Moving slightly to his right side? You cant just say that she moves to his right side, there should be an attempt to get to that side. -2 ?she moves so that her left shoulder may bump into his right, unbalancing him.? 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 5 for attack. +2 for bite +3 for shove 10 for injuries. Round one Roman Total: 37/50 August: 4 for clarity- -2 ?Contorted?? this is difficult to get my head over. -2 ? assault the side of his neck? How? How badly? Where abouts? -2 where abouts on his shoulder did she bite? 6 for powerplaying. -2 ? perhaps release her grip upon his shoulder.? Please don?t write down what you hope for the attacker to do. -2 crane his head far enough to reach her opposite shoulder? you cant assume that he was successful at reaching. 9 for defenses. +1 for each 2 for attack. +2 for bite to shoulder 10 for injuries.First round Round one August Total:31 /50 Round 2
Roman: 8 for clarity- minor errors 8 for powerplaying. -2 please don?t write down what you hope for the attacker to do. ?encourage him to let go.? 5 for defenses. +1 for each seen 5 for attack. +3 for bite to face, +2 for pushing forward to worsen 6 for injuries. -2 for bruising, -2 for minor bite. Round two Roamer Total: 32/50 August: 8 for clarity- -2 ?contort to protect vital areas. Be more specific. 5 for powerplaying. 5 for defenses. +1 for each seen -2 for ?protect vital areas? needs to be more specific. 6 for attack. +1 for kicking snow +3 for shove +2 for snap 4 for injuries. -2 for moderate bite, -2 for bruising ?2 for bite to ear Round two August Total: 28/50 Round 3
Roman: 6 for clarity- -2 where abouts on his face did she try to grab. -2 for confusion while reading 8 for powerplaying. -2 ?she turned snapping at the right side of his muzzle.? 8 for defenses. Notes 3 for attack. +3 for bite 6 for injuries. -2 for bruising -2 for moderate bite Round three Roman Total: 31/50 August: 8 for clarity- minor errors 7 for powerplaying. -3 ? would rear and slam his paws with all his weight onto 0 for defenses. Notes 0 for attack. Notes 6 for injuries. -2 for bite to muzzle -2 for bruising Round three August Total: 21/50 Roman: 100/150 August: 80/150 And the winner is...
Roman!August must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
Roman- Bruising will take 1 ic week to heal, bites will take 2 weeks August- Bruising will take 1 week to heal, bites 2 weeks Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) Notes For Roamer Be careful with powerplaying. There was also times when I found it hard to follow. Good fight overall! For Starry Same to you really, Watch powerplay and include much more attacks. On the last rounds make sure to include Defenses and attacks! You don?t just stop! - By [Luisiana]
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