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05-21-2014, 06:02 PM

HATI v AKEMI for SPAR



Round 1
AKEMI:

8 for clarity- specify where on his leg she tried to bite, be super specify where your wolf is aiming -2

9 for powerplaying. you assumed that he wouldn?t move and she would land beside him -1

10 for defenses. widened stance +1, claws digging into the earth +1, paws planted +1, knees bent +1, head aligned with spine +1, neck scrunched +1, chin tucked +1, ears pinned +1, eyes narrowed +1, shoulders rolled forward +1, hackles lifted +1, stomach tensed +1, tail tucked +1

4 for attack. aiming to slam her foot down in his +2, aiming a bit at his leg

10 for injuries.First round

Round one AKEMI Total: 41/50


HATI:

9 for clarity- which way did he pivot? -1,

10 for powerplaying. Notes

10 for defenses. widened stance +1, toes spread +1, claws digging into the ground +1, weight centered +1, knees bent +1, tail and head level with spine +1, shoulder rolled forward +1, chin tucked +1, hackles lifted +1, ears pinned +1, eyes narrowed +1

4 for attack. aimed grab at the junction of her spine and tail, attempt to lift her or knock how her hindlegs +2

10 for injuries. first round, two broken toes

Round one HATI Total: 43/50

Round 2

AKEMI:

10 for clarity-

10 for powerplaying. Notes

10 for defenses. eyes narrowed +1, ears pinned +1, neck scrunched +1, hackles lifted +1, tail tucked +1, widened stance +1, head level with spine +1, chin tucked +1, toes splayed +1, claws digging into the ground +1,

6 for attack. +3 for a bite aimed at his upper leg, +2 for attempt to step on his toes, +1 for using tail as a distraction

7 for injuries. bite wound to left hip

Round two AKEMI Total: 43/50


HATI:

10 for clarity- Notes

10 for powerplaying. Notes

8 for defenses. wide and squared stance +2, weight centered +1, bent legs +1, shoulders scrunched +1, hackles lifted +1, ears pinned +1, eyes narrowed +1,

4 for attack. aiming to slam his chest into her hip +2, jaws aiming to snap at her tail +2

7 for injuries. bite to his upper left leg

Round two HATI Total: 39/50



Totals:


AKEMI: 84/100

HATI: 82/100



And the winner is...


AKEMI! Hati must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out.

Damage:


AKEMI- bite to her hip will heal in 5 ooc days.


HATI- 2 left broken toes will heal in 2 ooc weeks, bite to his upper left leg 1 ooc week.


Notes:



Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here)
Notes

For Keno
You did really well with this fight but be sure to be super specify about where you are aiming your attacks.

For Hati
Really good fight! Just be sure to specify which direction you are moving



- By [saffie]