Marked to Die: Battle Training!
06-18-2014, 12:52 AM
D?gmar v Novocaine for training Round 1
D?gmar: 9 for clarity- Mostly clear 10 for powerplaying. none seen 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 6 for attack. +2 for slam +3 for attempted bite +1 for trying to gain a hold 10 for injuries.First round Round one D?gmar Total: 45/50 Novocaine: 4 for clarity- -3 ?attempting to slam into her chest? What part of him is trying to connect with what part of her chest? -3 ?hoping to catch her right leg in his grasp? Where is he trying to grab along her leg? 10 for powerplaying. none seen 5 for defenses. +1 for each seen 2 for attack. +2 for slam -1 for lack of clarity. +2 for bite -1 for lack of clarity. 10 for injuries.First round Round one Novocaine Total: 31/50 Round 2
D?gmar: 9 for clarity- Mostly clear 10 for powerplaying. none seen 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 8 for attack. +3 for jump and wrap +2 for trying to topple him with her weight +3 for spinal bite 6 for injuries. -2 for brusing to the chest -2 for shallow scratches to right paw Round two D?gmar Total: 43/50 Novocaine: 6 for clarity- -3 ?fell onto his left side? What did he attempt to do with Daeg in this time? What did he try to do to get her in a position where he could bite her face. -2 ?anything within biting distance? Please be specific of where he wishes to bite 7 for powerplaying. -3 not sure how he was able to bite at her face 5 for defenses. +1 for each seen 2 for attack. +2 bite at the face. 6 for injuries. -2 bruising on his throat -2 for bite to the spine Round two Novocaine Total: 26/50 Totals:
D?gmar: 88/100 Novocaine:57/100 And the winner is...
D?gmar! Novocaine must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
D?gmar moderate wounds will take 1 ooc weeks to heal. Bruises a few ic days Novocaine - Lacerations to the spine that will take 2 IC weeks to heal. Bruises a few ic days Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) Notes For Luna Good fight! You did great with your defenses! Only thing would be to watch out for assuming what damage you opponent will take. For Lolaf You did a great job playing an inexperienced fighter! Notes for next time to be more specific as to where you want you attacks to land and maybe throw in a few more attacks in rather then relying on that one. - By [Dione]
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