Keep Your Heartbeat Suspended
06-19-2014, 05:52 PM
Batari v D?gmar for Spar Round 1
Batari: 2 for clarity. -2 not specifying which side she attacked -3 for not specifying where she intended to hit her opponent to try and topple them -3 for not specifying where the bite should land 7 for powerplaying. -3 ?flying across the land to close the distance between them? you need to attempt to do this. 1 for defenses. +1 for every one listed 3 for attack. +3 leap 10 for injuries.First round Round one Batari Total: 22/50 D?gmar: 9 for clarity. mostly clear 10 for powerplaying. none seen 10 for defenses. +1 for every one seen 6 for attack. +3 attempted bite +1 vitals +2 attempted leg wrap 10 for injuries.First round Round one D?gmar Total: 45/50 Round 2
Batari: 8 for clarity. -2 need to specify where the bite is intended to land on the neck 8 for powerplaying. -2 ?used her powerful legs to leverage her mass forward ? need to attempt to do this 3 for defenses. +1 for every one seen, counter attacks don?t count as defenses 4 for attack. +3 bite +1 heaving weight down 7 for injuries. -2 moderate wounds to shoulder -1 bruising Round two Barati Total: 30/50 D?gmar: 8 for clarity. -2 D?gmar fell but is still below Barati? 10 for powerplaying. none seen 10 for defenses. +1 for every one seen 8 for attack. +1 rolling shoulders forward +1 launching herself forward under opponent +3 bite to underbelly +1 vitals +2 thrashing head to increase damage if bite lands 6 for injuries. -2 bite wound -1 bruising Round two D?gmar Total: 32/50 Round 3
Batari: 4 for clarity. -2 be more specific as to where you intend to land -2 not sure what you meant by ?tumbled to her left? -2 I struggled following the chain of events 8 for powerplaying. -2 ?left foreleg had been guided to the ground behind her opponents right foreleg ? you need to attempt to do this 0 for defenses. none listed, counter attacks don?t count as defenses 6 for attack. +3 bite +1 going for a joint +2 worsening the damage by rolling 7 for injuries. -3 damage to the paw Round three Batari Total: 25/50 D?gmar: 9 for clarity. mostly clear 10 for powerplaying. none seen 10 for defenses. +1 for every one seen 7 for attack. +2 paw drape +3 bite +2 vitals 7 for injuries. -3 gashes to the leg Round three D?gmar Total: 43/50 Totals:
Batari: 77/150 D?gmar: 120/150 And the winner is...
D?gmar! Batari must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
Batari - Bite to the paw which will take 3 ooc weeks to heal. Wounds to the base of the neck, which will take 2 ooc weeks to heal. Bruising will go away in a few IC days. D?gmar - Gashes along the top of the head and along her right cheek resulting in light scarring, will take 2 ooc weeks to heal. Gashes along inner thigh will take 2 ooc weeks to heal. Bruising will go away in a few IC days. Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) Notes For Pandafox Be careful with defenses! We look for specific defenses for fights and if you?d like me to list then feel free to message me on Viridiana?s account. Other then that, I loved reading this! For Luna As always Daeg is a tank and I loved reading her. There were a few clarity issues but nothing major. Great job with attempting and your defenses! - By [Dione]
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