THE SAINTS WE SEE ARE ALL MADE OF GOLD;
06-29-2014, 10:57 AM
Hades vs Svanerna for Spar Round 1
Hades: 2 for clarity -3 got very lost in his approach, there was also a lot of movement. what was the feint? the dirt? Try to be more succinct in your writing. -1 what type of movement to bring her down? -2 push her with what? neck? chest? legs? -2 what angle is he approaching her at? 8 for powerplaying. -2 be careful in assuming your opponent stayed in the same spot, you need to give your opponent time to respond. A lot can happen in the time it takes him to slow and kick up dust. 6 for defenses. +1 for each found 3 for attack +3 attack to shoulder 10 for injuries. first round Round one Total: 29/50 Svanerna: 9 for claritymostly clear, got a bit lost with her foot attack 8 for powerplaying. -2 if she didn't move and the area had little fat the bit would probably have been deep and more sever than moderate. 10 for defenses. +1 for each found 2 for attack +0 for paw wrap, points deducted for clarity, also she's wrapping underneath herself to get at the back of his knee, that distance is unlikely for her to close. +2 attack to shoulder, he's a good deal taller than her, it's unlikely she'd be able to reach his upper shoulder 10 for injuries. first round Round one Total: 39/50 Round 2
Hades: 5 for clarity-3 break away how? turn away? shuffle back? -2 "jumping to the left side" who's left? 0 for powerplaying.-5 waaayy to much movement with the circling. You must give your opponent room to respond. She could attack at any point in his circling. -3 again give your opponent time to react to your attacks, you don't know how she'll respond to the shoulder throw or whether or not she'll run. -2 " then jumping to the left side, to crash into her with the weight" you need an attempt phrase in here 6 for defenses. +1 each found 3 for attack+2 shoulder throw +1 bite (points deducted for nested attack, give your opponent time to respond to the first or else have this one occur simultaneously with the shoulder throw. if/then's can be perilous and get confusing quickly.) 7 for injuries. -1 bruising -2 scarring down foreleg Round Two Total: 21/50 Svanerna: 6 for clarity -2 clarify the angle a bit more and how she was able to lunge at him if he's? behind her? -2 ram into him with what? 10 for powerplaying. none found 6 for defenses.+1 each found 5 for attack+2 ramming into his back left hip (point deducted for clarity) +3 for bite to thigh 6 for injuries.-2 moderate bite to top of shoulder -2 bite to scruff, plus ripping Round Two Total: 33/50 Round 3
Hades: 3 for clarity-2 collide what with her head? his gut? pelvis? chest? -2 slam what into her? side? shoulder? -3 you must specify what damage the opponent did in your post. It's not enough to just have it in the summary. 6 for powerplaying.-2 "he could have easily thrown her before she made another move, but he used this time well to set his own defenses" don't assume he could've done so. It's not fair to your opponent. -2 give her a chance to respond to him bringing his underside on her before he goes running off for another attack. Too much movement. 8 for defenses. +1 each found 5 for attack+3 for bite +2 weight slam (points deducted for clarity) +0 underside slam (points deducted for powerplay and clarity) 5 for injuries. -2 for bruising -3 bite to thigh Round Three Total: 27/50 Svanerna: 9 for claritymostly clear 6 for powerplaying.-3 "She could have already gone for his throat or attempted to bite his balls, but she did not." again this sort of thing is not fair to your opponent. do not assume she could've done so and if she could then why didn't she? -1 "she always had the upper hand" same reasoning as above. 7 for defenses. 6 for attack+2 for bite (point deducted because do to the degree she'd have to twist herself to get at his neck just below his jaw. +3 for paw attack +1 attempting maim 5 for injuries.-2 bruising -3 bite to shoulder Round Three Total: 33/50 Totals:
Hades: 77/150 Svanerna: 105/150 And the winner is...
Svanerna! Hades must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
HadesBruising will heal in a few ooc days. Bite wounds will take 1 ooc weeks SvanernaBruising will heal in a few ooc days. Bite wounds will take 1 ooc weeks Notes:
For Starry Watch how much movement you allow your character to have. Fights take place in fractions of a second. Also work on your clarity and be specific about your attacks. I appreciate your attempt at creativity with your feints but be careful when trying to cram in too many attacks. The attack score is very hard to get high but even so it's better to have a few solid attacks than many that can cause docking in powerplay and clarity. For Cantti Not too much to add. You know what you're doing. Just watch some of the powerplaying statements in your posts. You can be docked for these even if they don't result in movement from your wolf. If the character is arrogant and you wish to showcase this set in thought or something so we know for sure it's them and not you. This applies to you as well Starry. To Both:Watch the OOC cattiness creeping into your IC. I know fights can sometimes get frustrating especially with two arrogant characters but I was really sensing some ooc tension in this. The comments so-and-so was stupid to do this, how did so-and-so possibly miss or whatever. It's not fun to read and immature. Please keep that to a minimum and trust the judges to catch any power playing, clarity, etc. issues. It's what we're here for. <3 - By [Lunarcat7]
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