Hard Luck Love (OLYMPUS)
07-24-2014, 09:37 PM
katja v virgil for kassander ROUND ONE
KATJA ----- clarity -- 8 out of 10 ; ?...but to bounce off and change her momentum into a completely different angle?? what angle would that be? (-2) powerplay -- 5 out of 10 ; the fact that katja changed her angle twice -- first while approaching virgil and second while ?bouncing off? of her -- seems to me like a bit too much movement (-3). the success of katja being able to even reach virgil?s abdomen with her jaws depends upon her success of bouncing off of virgil?s shoulder (-2). defenses -- 10 out of 10 ; squared stance, limbs bent, weight evenly distributed, skull lowered, tail out, shoulders rolled, neck scrunched, chin tucked, ears pinned, eyes narrowed, teeth exposed, hackles raised. attack -- 6 out of 10 ; attempting to strike virgil?s left shoulder with her own left shoulder, positioned at a forty-five degree angle (+3). attempted bite to virgil?s left-sided abdomen (+3). injuries -- 10 out of 10 ; first round. round one katja total --- 39 out of 50 VIRGIL ----- clarity -- 10 out of 10 ; nothing of note. powerplay -- 10 out of 10 ; nothing of note. defenses -- 10 out of 10 ; limbs spread equidistant apart, weight evenly distributed, toes spread, nails gripping, limbs bent, tail out, hackles raised, shoulders rolled, head lowered, neck scrunched, chin tucked, jaws set agape, eyes narrowed, ears pinned. attack -- 10 out of 10 ; attempting to shunt her left shoulder into katja?s left-sided chest (+3). attempting to dislocate katja?s left-sided mandible (+4, one point added for maim attempt). attempting to hook and pull back on katja?s left forelimb (+3). injuries -- 10 out of 10 ; first round, moderate bruising to lower left-sided chest. round one virgil total --- 50 out of 50 *throws confetti* ROUND TWO
KATJA ----- clarity -- 2 out of 10 ; where upon katja?s chest does virgil?s shoulder hit? (-2) which side of katja?s scruff does virgil grasp? (-2) katja has two left legs -- did she use her front of back? (-1) ?her forelegs came up as she did, her left leg on virgil?s right, her right leg on virgil?s left?? her right and left what? (-3) powerplay -- 7 out of 10 ; ?her forelegs came up as she did, her left leg on virgil?s right, her right leg on virgil?s left?? you cannot assume her forelimbs managed to land anywhere upon virgil (-3). defenses -- 10 out of 10 ; weight evenly distributed, squared stance, limbs bent, tail out, shoulders rolled, neck scrunched, hackles raised, ears pinned, eyes narrowed, toes splayed. attack -- 5 out of 10 ; attempting to crush virgil?s right forepaw (+2, point subtracted for clarity issue). attempted bite to virgil?s upper neck (+3). injuries -- 5 out of 10 ; mild bruising to left-sided chest (-1), deep lacerations to scruff (-3), minor bite to left ear (-1). round two katja total --- 29 out of 50 VIRGIL ----- clarity -- 7 out of 10 ; ?...right shoulder seeks to slam into the upper outside left leg?? which left leg? there are two (-1). which of katja?s left paws is targeted by which left paw of virgil?s? again, there are two left paws (-2). powerplay -- 10 out of 10 ; nothing of note. defenses -- 10 out of 10 ; weight evenly distributed among grounded limbs, limbs spread evenly apart, limbs bent, tail out, hackles raised, shoulders rolled, skull lowered, neck scrunched, chin tucked, jaws gaping, eyes narrowed, ears pinned, toes splayed, nails gripping. attack -- 7 out of 10 ; right shoulder seeking to slam against katja?s left leg (+2, subtracted point for clarity issue). left paw seeking to crush katja?s left paw (+2, point subtracted for clarity issues, point added for maim attempt). jaws aiming to bite into the base of katja?s left-sided neck (+3). injuries -- 7 out of 10 ; broken toes in right forepaw (-3). round two virgil total --- 41 out of 50 TOTALS
katja -- 68 out of 100 virgil -- 91 out of 100 AND THE WINNER IS...
virgil! katja must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. as this was an ownership challenge, kassander now belongs to olympus and his status as an olympus member may not be contested for another two ooc weeks. DAMAGE
katja -- mild bruising to chest, deep lacerations to left-sided scruff (will scar and heal completely in five ooc days), permanently docked left ear (will not affect hearing). virgil -- moderate bruising to chest, broken toes in right forepaw (will take an ooc week to heal and make hinder movement). NOTES
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) much better this time around! really don't know what else to say other than what i put in the notes so lol. judging by [ aly ]
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