RED RUM!!
08-17-2014, 09:21 PM
(This post was last modified: 08-21-2014, 08:14 PM by Bass.)
DAEGMAR v NAUSICA for SPAR/DOMINANCE Round 1
DAEGMAR: 10 for clarity- was clear to me 10 for powerplaying. none seen 10 for defenses. hackles raised, eyes narrowed, ears pined, legs spread equidistant, legs bent for balance, toes splayed, head lowered with spine, tail straightened for balance, shoulders rolled forward, chin tucked 5 for attack. bite to the face +3, thrusting of shoulder +2 10 for injuries.First round Round one DAEGMAR Total: 45/50 NAUSICA: 9 for clarity- how hard was the impact to her throat/how heavy was the bruise? 10 for powerplaying. None seen 10 for defenses. shoulders rolled forward, legs bent, ear pinned, eyes narrowed, claws dug into the earth, tightened core, tail aligned with spine, hackles raised, toes splayed, head lowered and tucked 4 for attack. throwing her weight forward +2, aiming to bring her left leg down on Daegs back +2 10 for injuries. Bite to her left cheek, bruise to her throat Round one NAUSICA Total: 43/50 Round 2
DAEGMAR: 9 for clarity- which way did she twist to face her opponent? -1, what side of her opponents neck is she trying to grab? -1, 10 for powerplaying. None seen 10 for defenses. hackles raised, eyes narrowed, ears pinned, chin tucked, shoulders rolled forward, limbs spread equidistant, legs bent, toes splayed, claws digging into the ground, tail aligned with spine 5 for attack. bite to the throat +3, attempted grab at opponents left leg +2 6 for injuries. moderate bruising to chest -2, sever bruising to her back -2 Round two DAEGMAR Total: 40/50 NAUSICA: 9 for clarity- What part of her body was she pushing against her opponent to push her back? 10 for powerplaying. None seen 9 for defenses. head lowered, throat tucked, legs squared, ears pinned, tail aligned with spine, knees bent, hacked raised, tightened core, eyes narrowed 5 for attack. bite to opponents scruff +3, attempted shove forward to push opponent back +2 0 for injuries. severe bite to throat -3, lacerations to upper and lower neck -2, bite to left cheek/jaw -3, bruising to chest -1, bruising to throat -1 Round two NAUSICA Total: 33/50 Round 3
DAEGMAR: 10 for clarity- Was clear 10 for powerplaying. None seen 8 for defenses. hackles raised, eyes narrowed, ears pinned, toes splayed, nails digging into ground, tail streamed out,, shoulders rolled forward, weight even distributed across four limbs 4 for attack. right paw attemepted to wrap around oppoenent lower neck +2, left leg lifting to slam against opponents throat +2 5 for injuries. moderate punctures to scruff -2, moderate bruising to chest -1, sever bruising to back -2 Round three DAEGMAR Total: 37/50 NAUSICA: 10 for clarity- Was clear 10 for powerplaying. Notes 10 for defenses. core tightened, toes splayed, claws dug into ground, tail tucked, hackles raised, ears pinned, eyes narrowed, knees bent, head tucked, paws spread 6 for attack. left limb aimed to wrap around opponent +2, right leg aims to slam down on opponents shoulders blade +2, attempted bite at left scruff +2 0 for injuries. severe bite to lower throat -3, wounds to left side of neck-2, wound to left cheek/jaw-3, heavy bruising to chest-2, bruised throat -2, heavy bit to lower left neck -2 Round three NAUSICA Total: 36/50 Totals:
DAEGMAR: 122/150 NAUSICA: 112/150 And the winner is...
Daegmar! Nausica must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
Not even gonna bother since this took so long. So sorry for the wait! Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) Notes For Daegmar Your posts were very clear and easy to understand, but just remember to be a little more clear about exactly where you are moving/positioned and where you are trying to attack. Also work on more complex attacks/multiple attacs For Nausica Same for you, your posts were clear and easy to understand, just remember to be super specific, even when it comes to injuries. Remember to use more complex attacks/multiple attacks - By [saffie]
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