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09-10-2014, 02:18 PM
Find #56

JUPITER v ARISU for MAIM/REMOVAL OF TONGUE



Round 1
JUPITER:

10 for clarity- Clear to me.

9 for powerplaying- ?he slunk around his companion's opponent, stationing himself a threatening (but not immediately pressing) distance behind the other woman? -1

9 for defenses- tail even with spine +1, head lowered +1, lips curled +1, hackles raised +1, weight distributed +1, legs bent +1, eyes narrowed +1, ears pinned +1, neck scrunched +1

5 for attack- bite to the face/jaw +3, pinning/stepping/clawing on Arisu?s paw +2

10 for injuries- First round

Round one JUPITER Total: 43/50

ARISU:

9 for clarity- Which way did her head tip when she went to grab Jups leg? -1

8 for powerplaying. This would also angle her cranium to slam into the chest of the other -1, trying to step on Jups right paw, you assumed that she already put it back down -1

10 for defenses. ears pinned +1, legs bent +1, claws digging into the ground +1, weight distributed +1, head aligned with spine +1, tail aligned with spine +1, neck scrunched +1, shoulders rolled forward +1, chin tucked +1, eyes narrowed +1

4 for attack. bite aimed at Jups right foreleg +2, headbutting Jups chest +1, slamming her paw down on Jups +1

10 for injuries.bite to the scruff

Round one ARISU Total: 41/50



Round 2

JUPITER:

9 for clarity- which leg is Jup attempting to hook? (-1),

10 for powerplaying. None seen

6 for defenses. ears piined +1, eyes narrowed +1, tail aligned with spine +1, hackles raised +1, neck scrunched +1, shouldered forward +1

7 for attack. bite to the scruff +2, pressing her weight forward and down +2, hooping her right leg around Arisus? forearm +1 (partial points because you didn?t specify which leg), mercurys attack on the Achilles heel +2

8 for injuries. sprained right toes -1, moderate bite to upper right leg -1

Round two JUPITER Total: 40/50


ARISU:

9 for clarity- ?But her opponent had not released her own hold, the russet girl ripping her head to her own left and downward just in time for that slight slack in her opponent?s jaws? is she freeing herself orr what? -1,

10 for powerplaying. None seen

5 for defenses. eyes narrowed +1, ears pinned +1, head aligned with spine +1, hackles raised +1, tail aligned with spine +1

5 for attack. bite to neck/jaw +3, left leg lifting in an attempt to wrap around Jups neck +2

6 for injuries. small bruise on forehead -1, light stratced on her right foreleg -1, puncture wounds on back left leg -2

Round two ARISU Total: 35/50



Totals:


NAME: 83/100

NAME: 76/100



And the winner is...


JUPITER! Arisu must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Jupiter is now able to remove her tongue.

Damage:


Starsight- strained toes wil heal in 1 OOC week, moderate bite to upper leg will heal in 1 OOC week


Keno- Severe bite to scruff will heal in 7 OOC days, light bruise to forehead will heal in 3 OOC days, scratches on her right foreleg will heal in 3 OOC days


Notes:



Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here)
Notes

For Starsight
Overall fight was great! But remember to watch out for Powerplaying with Mercury, whether or not he?s attacking right away, you cant assume that he successfully positions him behind your opponent (even if he?s super sneaky).

For Keno
Over all fight was great, just try using more complex attacks.



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