Let's Dance, Baby!
09-16-2014, 12:56 PM
Odette v Sibelle for Rank Round 1
Odette: 8 for clarity- [-2] aimed for the front or back leg? 3 for powerplaying. [-2] you need an attempt when odette moved backwards. [-2] needed an attempt when closing the distance [-1] running at a strange angle isnt very specific [-2] an attempt needed when sharply turning left 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 3 for attack. +3 for attempted bite 10 for injuries.First round Round one Odette Total: 34/50 Sibelle: 8 for clarity- [-2] where was she bitten on the leg? Exactly where odette aimed? 8 for powerplaying. [-2] seems unlikely that she would be able to try and bite her neck and also try unbalancing her without Sibelle becoming in an awkward situation; especially since odette already has a leg. 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 5 for attack. +3 for attempted bite +2 for trying to unbalance her 10 for injuries.First round Round one Sibelle Total: 41/50 Round 2
Odette: 9 for clarity- [-1] sibelle aimed for the neck, not scruff. 2 for powerplaying. [-2] 'and held on' needs an attempt [-2] with the force of the leg in a mouth,, it would cause discomfort for Odette if she wont let go [-2] an attempt needed when stepping forward [-2] needs an attempt to push sibelles side 7 for defenses. +1 for each seen 5 for attack. +3 for attempted shove +2 for attempting to keep hold of sib leg area 5 for injuries. -3 for bite wound -2 for bruising to jaw Round two Odette Total: 28/50 Sibelle: 8 for clarity- [-2] paw high the earth doesnt make sense. 7 for powerplaying. [-3] seems highly unlikely that sib can have a leg over odette, have the other in odettes mouth and then push her self forward in an attempt to knock odette over. 10 for defenses. +1 to each seen 5 for attack. +2 for attempting to keep hold of scruff +1 for trying to worsen with tug +2 for trying to unbalance odette . 5 for injuries. -3 for worsened wound to leg -2 for bruising Round two Sibelle Total: 35/50 Totals:
Odette: 62/100 Sibelle: 76/100 And the winner is...
Sibelle! Odette must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
Odette- All would have healed by now Sibelle- Same here Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) Notes For Wynn Watch out for powerplay, make sure that whatever you try to do you attempt it or else it counts as assumed. Also try using 2-3 attacks to gain more points! For saff Good job, nothing really to note here. Sorry guys this took so long - By [Luisiana]
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