Aha! {Festival Spar}

The Judge · 10-08-2014, 11:54 PM

Thor VS Kau

Round 1

Kau:

CLARITY: 10 / 10

POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10

DEFENSES: 7 / 10

ATTACK: 7 / 10

INJURIES: 10 / 10

Round one Kau Total: 44 / 50

Thor:

CLARITY: 7 / 10

POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10

DEFENSES: 6 / 10

ATTACK: 8 / 10

INJURIES: 10 / 10

Round one Thor Total: 41 / 50

Round 2

Kau:

CLARITY: 8 / 10

POWERPLAYING: 9 / 10

DEFENSES: 7 / 10

ATTACK: 4 / 10

INJURIES: 8 / 10

Round two Kau Total: 36 / 50

Thor:

CLARITY: 9 / 10

POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10

DEFENSES: 8 / 10

ATTACK: 7 / 10

INJURIES: 6 / 10

Round two Thor Total: 40 / 50

Totals:

Kau: 80 /100

Thor: 81 /100

And the winner is...

Thor!Kau must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out.

Damage:

Kau- Brusing on the left side of his neck and chest, possible bite on the left side of his neck

Thor- Bite wound on the shoulder, brusing on left shoulder and chest

Notes:

First off, sorry for the delay, guys. I might have kinda forgetten about this x_X Anyway, good fight! As you can see it was reeeeeally close.
Keno: First post was fine and you already listed your mistakes for your second post in the notes so you know what you did. Only other note is to try to avoid doing a one move, very simple attack like that because it won't earn you any extra points.
Lazuli: I love your writing style, but your attacks were hard to read at times. My suggestion would be to just dial down the wordyness just a bit so that the attacks can be more straightforward to read. Also, be careful to make sure all of the defenses you want in your post are actually stated in your post.
- Shelby <3

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