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10-13-2014, 05:55 PM



SIBELLE VS KYLAR FOR FORCE CLAIM OR FREEDOM


Round 1

Kyar:

CLARITY: 8 / 10

- 2 for confusion with his position compared to Sibelle/how his attacks were hitting


POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10

No powerplaying found


DEFENSES: 10 / 10

+ 10 for defenses


ATTACK: 7 / 10

+ 4 maim/grip (biting the back of her neck), + 2 normal attack (slamming chest into her shoulder), +1 minor attack (forearm around her shoulders)


INJURIES: 10 / 10

First round, no points off


Round one Kylar Total: 45 / 50



Sibelle:

CLARITY: 10 / 10

Clear post


POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10

No powerplaying found


DEFENSES: 10 / 10

+ 10 for defenses


ATTACK: 4 / 10

+ 4 maim/grip attempts (biting his pro-sternum)


INJURIES: 10 / 10

First round, no points off


Round one Sibelle Total: 44 / 50


Round 2

Kylar:


CLARITY: 7 / 10

- 2 for confusion with the placement of his attacks, - 1 for not specifying what injuries he took


POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10

No powerplaying found

DEFENSES: 10 / 10

+ 10 for defenses

ATTACK: 6 / 10

+ 4 maim/grip attempts (grabbing the top of her muzzle), +1 normal attack (hitting his chest into her bite), +1 minor attack (hitting her shoulders with his paw)


INJURIES: 7 / 10

- 3 severe laceration (hitting his chest into her teeth)


Round two Kylar Total: 40 / 50


Sibelle:


CLARITY: 9 / 10

- 1 mild confusion with how she is attacking


POWERPLAYING: 10 / 10

No powerplaying found


DEFENSES: 10 / 10

+10 for defenses


ATTACK: 5 / 10

+ 4 maim/grip attempt (biting his pro-sternum), +1 minor attack (tripping him)


INJURIES: 6 / 10

- 1 moderate bruising (stretched/brused lower jaw/joint), - 3 severe lacerations (lacerations on the top half of her muzzle


Round two Sibelle Total: 40 / 50


Totals:

Kylar: 85 /100

Sibelle: 84 /100



And the winner is...

Kylar! Sibelle must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out.

Damage:

Kylar- Severe brusing and lasserations to the chest



Sibelle- Brusing on the chest, moderate wound to the left side of her neck, tearing along the sides of her muzzle



Notes:
Good fight guys! A few quick notes:
Dione: Attacks got a little muddled for me at times. Good job trying to work in more attacks, but some more directionals would have helped. Also make sure you're clearly stating when and how Kylar is getting injuries since it made it hard to figure out when Sibelle's attacks were landing and made me take off points for powerplaying.

Saf: Very easy to read. Really just needed more attacks in your first post and a little more clarity in her attacks.

--- Shelby <3