Own (Arcanum)
10-26-2014, 06:05 PM
Cataleya v Caeto for ACCEPTANCE Round 1
CATALEYA: 8 for clarity. -2 ?which side of the face did she intend to bite?? 10 for powerplaying. none seen. 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 6 for attack. +2 body check. +3 bite. +1 trip. 10 for injuries.First round. Round one CATALEYA Total: 44/50 CAETO: 2 for clarity- -2 ?her left shoulder hitting more of the front of his right shoulder blade than the middle of his chest? where was he struck? What damage came from this strike? -2 ?her attempt to grab his eye would go south slightly, she may have been able to grab hold of his right cheek or lower jaw.? Wasn?t quite sure what section to put this in but you choose what damage your character takes. -2 ?He could have grabbed her right shoulder or forelimb, or nothing at all? you must state where you intend for your bite to land -2 ?he would push all of his weight with his left knee and right paw? not sure what leg he is using, if its his front then he only has an ankle and a shoulder there. 4 for powerplaying. -2 ?He had turned little while preparing? must attempt to do this -2 ?His head pulled upward as they collided? must attempt to do this -2 ?lunging to grab scruff behind her right ear? must attempt to do this 2 for defenses. +1 for each seen 2 for attack. +3 bite. -1 area not specified. 10 for injuries. First round. (moderate bruising to mid right chest, deep bite to right side of face on cheek and lower jaw) Round one CAETO Total: 20/50 Round 2
CATALEYA: 8 for clarity--2 what area of his body did she attempt to hit with her left shoulder 6 for powerplaying. -2 ?hoping that if she is successful in grabbing his muzzle? don?t assume things -2 ?but if he falls, then he would undoubtedly tear the skin? don?t assume things 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 6 for attack. +3 bite. +2 control +1 weight 7 for injuries. -3 moderate puncture wounds to lower right neck Round two CATALEYA Total: 37/50 CAETO: 4 for clarity- -2 ?knee? is not an area of a wolf?s front limb. -2 what damage was taken to his nose? -2 how did he shift his weight to get his paw back underneath him 8 for powerplaying. -2 -2 ?He was able to pull his left paw up to a flat surface ? must attempt to do this. 0 for defenses. +1 for each seen (none listed) 4 for attack. +3 bite. +1 control/joint 7 for injuries. -3 sever bite to his nasal passage Round two CAETO Total: 23/50 Totals:
CATALEYA: 81/100 CAETO: 43/100 And the winner is...
Cataleya! Caeto must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
CATALEYA- moderate bruising to left shoulder/chest will take a few ic days to heal. moderate puncture wounds to lower right neck will take 2 ooc weeks to heal. CAETO- moderate bruising to mid right chest will take a few ic days to heal, deep bite to right side of face on cheek and lower jaw will take 2 ooc weeks to heal. Sever punctures on upper nose, bone cracked, will take 3 ooc weeks to heal and painful to breath through nose for 1 ooc week. Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) Notes For Saf All in all a good fight, need to clarify a few things a bit more but other then that good job! . For Chrono Congrats on your first fight! All in all pretty good, you need to work on your defenses more then anything, all else comes with practice. Also make sure whenever you move your wolf even if it doesn?t effect your opponent make sure you ?attempt? to do it. If you have any questions feel free to pm or skype me! - By [Dee]
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