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Pay Up (BASS)



Darrah

Loner

age
1 Year
gender
Male
gems
0
size
Small
build
posts
44
player
10-28-2014, 01:35 PM




His leader seemed to be pleased with the defenses set by at least Darrah. Vivianna was behind him and so he could not see what she was doing. Bass spoke and critiqued every fine particle of fur and bones and flesh that Darrah had. Determination was welling in Darrah was he fixed the things that Bass suggested he fix. His pure white toes swiftly spread as he lodged his toes into the earth to hold his body level. He definitely did not want to get knocked over in a fight. He lowered his head so it was level with his spine while he tucked his chin closer to his chest to cover his throat. His shoulders were rolled forward and the rest of his defenses stayed in motion. His tail straitened out in order to make himself level at all ends. He held the position with a small grin, hoping his mentor approve. "Like this?" He asked with hopes of a good answer.


Vivanna was the next to be corrected. She nodded as Bass laid it on her and her soft blue eyes narrowed. She prepared herself to try what she was going to try. She hissed as she lashed out, her left front paw being used for the strike against air before she pulled back, her balance failing her in the last few seconds when it mattered most. She hissed as she fell flat on her side. She stood back up with a frown as she prepared herself to try it again. She knew her mistake and she was going to fix it if it was the last thing she did. She again, lashed out, but she did so with her right front paw before landing swiftly on her feet. She gave a small smile as she tried it once more with her left front paw and she landed on her feet. She gleamed with pride as she stood there without falling.




"Darrah Dialog." "Vivianna Dialog."