Here it goes, here it goes, here it goes again
11-08-2014, 08:36 AM
Esti v Laufey for Dominance Round 1
Esti: 6 for clarity- [-2] 'just above where she had been nibbling' not very specific for the beginning of the fight. Where abouts on neck? near the top? more to the right or left? [-2] where his jaw ended isn't specific either? which side of the jaw, left or right. 6 for powerplaying.[-2] ' bite past the fur and into the skin' attempt needed. [-2] attempt needed when pressing against him. 6 for defenses. +1 for each seen 3 for attack. +3 for bite to neck 10 for injuries. first round Round one Total: 31/50 Laufey : 10 for clarity- Clear! 10 for powerplaying. none seen 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 6 for attack. +3 for bite to eyes +1 for maim attempt +2 for shove/ attempting to unbalance 10 for injuries. first round Round one Total: 46/50 Round 2
Esti: 6 for clarity- [-3] why did his attack to the eyes fail? [-1] i found the whole last paragraph ectremely hard to understand/ visualise. 8 for powerplaying.[-2] its rather unrealistic to try and throw herself out and also try keeping hold of his neck. 6 for defenses. +1 for each seen 5 for attack. +1 for attempting to worsen wound to neck +3 for aiming to rip out a vital part to neck +1 for maim attempt 7 for injuries. -3 injuries to skull Round two Total: 32/50 Laufey: 10 for clarity- . 7 for powerplaying. -3 releasing his hold and pulling himself away would make his neck even worser of, it'd be hard to carry on with a very bad neckwound. 7 for defenses. +1 for each seen 5 for attack. +3 for bite to side of the face +2 for shove 6 for injuries. -4 for bad wound to neck. [decided by judge] Round two Total: 35/50 Totals:
Esti: 63/100 Laufey: 81/100 And the winner is...
Laufey! Esti must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
Esti - Wounds to head and left cheek (may cause permanent scarring) Laufey - Wounds to neck (may cause permanent scarring) Notes:
For Esti Try to include more defences and make sure to read over your posts to be more clear! For Laufey Good fight! watch out for realism though. You can both pm me for questions. - By [Luisiana]
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