SIC SEMPER TYRANNIS
11-09-2014, 11:43 PM
VIRGIL v KATJA for YFIR Round 1
VIRGIL: 8 for clarity- how far apart are they? -1, without knowing how far apart they are, its hard to say whether or not virgil could gain enough momentum to crack ribs -1 10 for powerplaying. None seen 10 for defenses.+1 for each listed 6 for attack. shoulder check to katja?s chest +1, bite to the face/eye +4, slamming katjas front left paw and twisting her own paw +1 10 for injuries.First round Round one VIGRIL Total: 44/50 KATJA: 9 for clarity- -1 how severe are the lacerations to her face ie will they scar? 10 for powerplaying. None seen 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 5 for attack. bite to the top of virgils muzzle +4, shoulder check to Virgils chest +1 10 for injuries.First round Round one KATJA Total: 44/50 Round 2
VIRGIL: 10 for clarity- No issue 9 for powerplaying. you didn?t mention Katja attempting to pull her paw out from under Virgils paw in your attack on her paw/leg/ankle -1 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 7 for attack. ear maim +4, attempting to break katjas right ankle +3 6 for injuries. heavy bruise to her chest -2, moderate lacerations to the right size of her muzzle -2 Round two VIRGIL Total: 42/50 KATJA: 9 for clarity- not sure how katja could reach virgils left elbow when her right side is closer to katjas head -2 10 for powerplaying. None seen 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 5 for attack. shoulder checking Virgils chest +1, bite to Virgils left elbow +4 0 for injuries. severe bruising on her chest -2, broken toes -5, moderately bruised toes -2, moderate gash to her scruff -2 Round two KATJA Total: 33/50 Round 3
VIRGIL: 10 for clarity- no issues 9 for powerplaying. Not entirely sure how Virgil could intercept Katjas full bite force to her elbow -1 10 for defenses. +1 for each seen 6 for attack. shoulder checking the area behind katjas right foreleg and stepping on katjas right paw +2, bite to Katjas muzzle and jerking her head to her left +4 6 for injuries. severe bruise to her chest -2, moderate bite to her right elbow -2 Round three VIGRIL Total: 41/50 KATJA: 7 for clarity- how severe is the bruise on her ribs? -1, which way is she pivoting her body? -1, not entirely sure whats going on with her scruff -1, Im not sure that Virgil will ever be to Katjas left -1 8 for powerplaying. She needs to attempt to pivot -1, She needs to attempt to twist her head -1 8 for defenses. +1 for each seen 4 for attack. forcing Virgils jaws wider +1, bite to the throat +3 3 for injuries. fractures ribs -4, severe bruise to the right side of her ribs -3 Round three KATJA Total: 31/50 Totals:
VIGRIL: 127/150 KATJA: 109/150 And the winner is...
Virgil! Katja must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
VIGRIL- severely bruised chest (2 ooc week), moderately bruised shoulder (1 ooc week), moderate lacerations to her muzzle (1 ooc week), moderate bite to her right elbow (1 ooc week) KATJA- severe bruising to her chest (2 ooc weeks), broken toes (4 ooc weeks), bruised toes (1 ooc week), moderate bite to her scruff (1 ooc week), Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) Notes For Muse Nothing really, your posts are clear and easy to understand, you have complex attacks and your defenses are solid. Only thing is your notes in parenthesis within your post make things a tad bit difficult to understand because Im not sure if they are OOC notes, or Virgils thoughts. For Tea Your posts were also clear and easy to understand, you had great attacks and your defenses were solid. Though watch the realism of your injuries, its great that you take damage, but remember the momentum/weight needed to major break/fracture bones. Just be careful of how you word things because some things they get confusing, like in your last attack in regards to Katjas scruff/Virgils bite. - By [saffie]
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