Novaro Vs Levaithi
11-12-2014, 11:48 PM
LEVAITHI vs NOVARO for SPAR Round 1
LEVAITHI: 6 for clarity: -2 what area of Nova?s limb did he try and grab. -2 what did he intend to do when he slammed his paw down 8 for powerplaying. -2 ?he jumped at the male? you must attempt to do this. 4 for defenses. +1 for each seen. -2 for not redistributing weight when lifting paw 3 for attack. +2 bite to leg +1 paw slam 10 for injuries. first round Round three LEVAITHI Total: 31/50 NOVARO: 6 for clarity: -2 what parts of his body moved when he shifted. 10 for powerplaying. none seen. 8 for defenses. +1 for each seen. -2 not repositioning balance when lifting 3 for attack. +2 bite to ear +1 paw slam 10 for injuries. first round Round three NOVARO Total: 37/50 Round 2
LEVAITHI: 4 for clarity: -2 did he release nova?s leg? -2 how did he re approach nova? -2 was he looking to head butt nova in the throat? Or simply just apply slow pressre? -2 how did he shift so he would pull Nova over? 8 for powerplaying. -2 ?Levaithi would take a few steps back as quickly as he could? you must attempt to do this. 6 for defenses. +1 for each seen 4 for attack. +3 head to throat +1 tipping 8 for injuries. -2 moderate cuts to forehead Round two LEVAITHI Total: 30/50 NOVARO: 8 for clarity: -2 how did he brace himself? 8 for powerplaying. -2 ?Novaro would step back slightly? you must attempt to do this. 8 for defenses. +1 for each seen. -2 not repositioning weight when lifting a leg 6 for attack. +3 bite to eat +1 control bite/artery +2 punch to the nose 9 for injuries. -1 minor bruising to the jaw Round two NOVARO Total: 39/50 Totals:
LEVAITHI: 61/100 NOVARO: 76/100 And the winner is...
NOVARO! Levaithi must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
LEVIAITHI: Minor cuts to the upper skull, will take 2 ooc weeks to heal, faint scarring. NOVARO: Minor cuts to mid front left leg, will take 2 ooc week to heal with fain scarring. Minor bruising to lower jaw will take a few IC days to heal. Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) Notes For Riv Great job playing an inexperienced wolf! I think you know your defenses, I have looked at some of your other fights but that was what really got you here! Also be careful with directions and your intentions, I got a bit lost a few times. For Luis Overall great fight! Pretty clear, missed some ?attempting? here and there but what really got you was the balance. We like people to try and say something like ?he would widen his stance and redistribute his weight over his remaining paws? when you life a leg. Other then that great fight both of you! If you guys have any questions feel free to contact me <3 - By [Dee]
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