Round 1
Cataleya:
9 for clarity- -2 how is she moving to the right to line them up? is she twisting? when she moves to the right is she still attacking straight on or is she at angle?
10 for powerplaying. none seen
10 for defenses. +1 for each seen
10 for attack. +3 shoulder slam (point not given for maim attempt as they're starting to close for Cat to work up enough momentum to realistically dislocate the shoulder) +3 bite +1 maim +2 paw slam +1 maim attempt
10 for injuries. first round
Round one Total: 48/50
Qanik:
9 for clarity--1 which right paw is she lifting?
10 for powerplaying.none seen
10 for defenses.+1 for each seen
7 for attack.+2 paw attack +1 breaking balance to two legs +1 shoulder push [full points not given for the shoulder being wounded and the close quarters limiting momentum and force] +3 bite [point for maim not given as its unlikely she could keep her shoulder pushing against cat and still reach the intended target, particularly with a grip on her scruff]
10 for injuries.first round
Round one Total: 46/50
Round 2
Cataleya:
4 for clarity--2 where on her side did Qanik's bite land? -2 Which side did the attack land on? left or right? -2 How is Cat positioning herself to force her weight "onto her opponents neck". It reads like a chest slam to me but you seem to be hinting at her putting her weight over Qanik to push her to the ground.
10 for powerplaying.none seen
9 for defenses.+1 for each seen -2 make sure to mention that you've redistributed your balance when she shifts to her back legs.
4 for attack.+3 maintain hold and rip scruff +1 forcing weight on Qanik [minus 1 for clarity]
6 for injuries.-2 moderate bruising to shoulder -2 bite wound to chest, judges deduction [I find it really unlikely that Cat could shift out of range and get only a few scratches from Qanik's attack with one of her paws in the air and Qanik's head practically between her front legs due to the scruff hold before the attack could be completed]
Round two Total: 33/50
Qanik:
2 for clarity--2 was it Cat's chest that landed on Qanik's shoulders? you have to state I can't assume -1 adjusted her weight how?-1 which right paw is she pulling up? -2 where on Cat's belly is she trying to tickle? -2 what angle is her paw moving? between Cat's forelegs? around the side? very very important in trying to figure out how the jaw attack will happen. -2 how is she conducting the jaw attack? Is she moving underneath or around Qanik?
10 for powerplaying.
10 for defenses. +1 each seen
5 for attack.+2 shove +1 tickle [-1 for clarity but +1 for creativity, I can't believe I just read that] +2 bite [points deducted for clarity, if her paw is between cat's forelegs it's unlikely she could lunge simultaneously for the hind leg]
6 for injuries. -2 moderate wound to scruff -1 bruising to shoulders
Round two Total: 33/50
Round Three
Cataleya:
6 for clarity--2 what part of her body is she trying to press into Qanik's head and neck -2 where on Qanik's head, neck and shoulders is she trying to put the weight? You need to specific especially as Qanik's head is tilted to bite.
5 for powerplaying.-5 Qanik stated Cat's attack landed on her shoulders not her neck. Even if you disagree with the positioning you have to roll with it.
10 for defenses.+1 each seen
6 for attack.+2 trying to grasp Qanik's chest +3 bite to spine +1 weight attack [-1 for clarity]
7 for injuries. -1 bruising to sternum -2 bite wound
Round Three Total: 34/50
Qanik:
6 for clarity--2 what does Qanik hope to accomplish by jerking her head back? Is she trying to worsen the bite or is this part of trying to put cat off balance? maybe both? -2 which direction is she extending her left legs
4 for powerplaying.-2 you need to attempt to jerk your head back, especially if this is part of an attack to increase damage. -2 you have two shoulder attacks in the same post, make sure you give your opponent room to respond to both of them -2 there was a lot of movement in this post her head is moving back then it's moving up to Cat's belly. I feel like there was just a lot to try and process in this post in particular.
8 for defenses. +1 for each seen -2 no redistribution of balance
8 for attack.+1 pulling jaw back [-1 for clarity] +2 shoulder push +1 push weight into Cat's hind leg [-1 powerplay] +2 paw wrap +2 bite [point deducted for pp]
7 for injuries.-2 moderate bite -1 strained muscles
Round Three Total: 33/50
Totals:
Cataleya: 115/150
NAME: 112/150
And the winner is...
Cataleya! Qanik must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Qanik and Cairus now belong to Arcanum.
Damage:
Cataleya: moderate bruising to shoulder (3 ooc days) bite wounds (5 ooc days) bruised sternum (1 ooc day)
Qanik: bite wounds (5 ooc days) bruising to shoulder (3 ooc days) strained muscles(1 ooc day)
Notes:
Holy close fight Batman, I was on the edge of my seat judging this one. The first round for both of you were excellent and very clear but after that things got progressively more difficult to decipher and I admit I really struggled with some aspects and had to go a lot with my own interpretation so I apologize if that ruffles any feathers.
Tea, for you in particular I just wanted to say I enjoyed reading your attacks, fights tend to get pretty formulaic so I appreciate you shaking things up to make for a more engaging fight. Just be sure to add in the same specifics as you would any other attack so you don't shoot yourself in the foot.
Umm…. that's all I have. Yea. xD Lunar had a long week, lol. <3 Also I apologize if the judging for is a bit wonky. We'll likely need to tweak it to fit more with the new layout.
- By [lunarcat7]
