Round 1
Mercy:
6 for clarity- -2 is she attempting to come from the bottom or top of Abeline’s muzzle? -2 what area of the muzzle did the try and bite? Tip, mid, near the cheeks?
4 for powerplaying. -2 ‘the white girl dipped her head down’ you must attempt to do this. -2 ‘the girl then yanked her head downwards’ this is a coincidental. -2 ‘stretching it forward’ you must attempt to do this.
10 for defenses. +1 for each seen
6 for attack. +3 bite to muzzle [control bite] +3 clawing eye [maim attack]
10 for injuries. first round
Round one Total: 36/50
Abelinda:
0 for clarity- -2 did the attack on her muzzle land? If so where on her muzzle was she grabbed? -2 did she escape mercy’s grip? If so what damage was taken in the process if any? (I’m reading it as Abel allowed Mercy to pull her muzzle down so Abel could avoid the grip?) -2 how did she position her head to slam it into Mercy’s lower jaw? -4 where did Abel’s upper and lower jaws land on mercy’s face, what area of the muzzle did she intend to grab (near the nose, mid, closer to the cheeks)
8 for powerplaying. -2 no reasoning or movement was given for why Mercy’s attack on Abel’s eye missed it’s mark.
10 for defenses. +1 for each seen
4 for attack. +1 slam to the muzzle +3 bite to muzzle [control bite]
10 for injuries.first round (moderate cuts along lower jaw from mid point to chin, light scratch on upper left brow)
Round one Total: 32/50
Round 2
Mercy:
8 for clarity- -2 not sure what you meant by ‘would hopefully pull the left side of Abel’s face’.
0 for powerplaying. -2 ‘for Mercy simply raised her own head’ you must attempt to do this. -2 ‘with a swift motion Mercy’s head ducked downwards towards Abel’ you must attempt to do this. -2 cannot assume that she made it up and was able to bring her weight back down. -2 ‘she quickly transferred her weight’ you must attempt to do this. -2 ‘If her teeth landed, the move would hopefully pull of the left side of Abel's face, but if it did not at least her own head has a bit of distance from Abel's.’ you can’t make your opponent choose between two options.
10 for defenses. +1 for each seen
4 for attack. +3 bite to face +1 momentum
6 for injuries. -2 bruising to lower jaw -2 minor lacerations on upper and lower muzzle
Round two Total: 28/50
Abelinda:
4 for clarity- -2 what was she trying to ram into mercy’s underside, her shoulder, chest, neck? -2 how did she position her jaws to grab mercy’s flank? -2 what shoulder/neck area exactly? where on her body did the attack land?
6 for powerplaying. -2 ‘launching the much smaller wolf forward.’ You must attempt to do this. -2 ‘if a hold was gained’ this is a coincidental, you cannot base your next attack on whether or not your first makes contact.
10 for defenses. +1 for each seen
6 for attack. +2 for ramming to underside +3 bite +1 vital area
8 for injuries. -2 moderate lacerations to mid spine
Round two Total: 34/50
Totals:
Mercy: 64/100
Abelinda: 66/100
And the winner is...
Abelinda! Mercy must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out.
Damage:
Mercy: Bruising to lower jaw and lower abdomen will take a few IC days to heal. Minor lacerations on upper and lower muzzle will take 1 OOC week to heal.
Abelinda: Moderate cuts along lower jaw from mid point to chin and moderate lacerations to mid spine will tale 2 ooc weeks to heal. Light scratch on upper left brow will take 1 ooc week to heal.
Notes:
Eve, amazing first round! Second one got you, defiantly watch your powerplaying and try and get more then one attack in if at all possible!
Kayi, great job! You were pretty consistent, just watch your clarity, make sure you specify very specific areas and not just where your attacking but which way you are moving to do said attack. Also make sure if you are going to dodge an opponents attack to explain why, and when you alter where an opponents attack you are specify where the attack lands!
- By [dee]
