Round 1
VIRGIL:
9 for clarity- which leg is she trying to lift? i know its obvious, but hind leg or front leg? -1
10 for powerplaying. None seen
10 for defenses. +1 for each seen
7 for attack. shoulder check to the chest +2, bite to the throat/maim attempt +4, kicking Kapra’s leg +1
10 for injuries.First round
Round one VIRGIL Total: 46/50
KATJA:
10 for clarity- was clear to me
10 for powerplaying. None seen
9 for defenses. +1 for each seen
5 for attack. shoulder check to Vir’s hip +2, bite to Vir’s side +3
10 for injuries.First round
Round one KATJA Total: 44/50
KAPRA:
6 for clarity-so in your attack, you say he’s trying to bite her snout, and his lower jaws are aiming to connect with her lower jaw, is he trying to bite only her lower jaw, thus placing his upper jaw in her mouth, or is he trying to get her entire snout in his mouth and thus force her mouth closed? -2, which way is his head tipping to bite her snout? -1, where exactly on her snout is he trying to bite? -1
10 for powerplaying. None seen
10 for defenses. +1 for each seen
4 for attack. bite to the top of Vir’s snout/maim attempt +4,
10 for injuries.First round
Round one KAPRA Total: 40/50
Round 2
VIRGIL:
8 for clarity- which side of her ribs since kat bite, left or right? -1, which shoulder is bruised? -1,
9 for powerplaying. None really sure that Virgil is able to shatter any major bone with a headbutt -1
10 for defenses. +1 for each seen
5 for attack. bite to Kaps lower right leg +3, headbutt to Kaps chest +2
2 for injuries. moderate bruise to left hip -2, moderate lacerations to her left ribs -2, light bruise to her shoulder -1, severe lacerations on her snout -3
Round two VIRGIL Total: 34/50
KATJA:
8 for clarity- What damage did she receive for colliding with Vir’s hip? -2
10 for powerplaying. None seen
10 for defenses. +1 for each seen
5 for attack. bite to Vir’s back leg/maim attempt +4, trying to pull Vir’s back leg out from her under +1
8 for injuries. moderate bruise to her shoulder -2
Round two KATJA Total: 41/50
KAPRA:
8 for clarity- how is he trying to come down her snout? -2,
9 for powerplaying. a foot is a rather large distance to move -1
6 for defenses. +1 for each seen
4 for attack. bite to her snout/ maim attempt +4
6 for injuries.moderate bruise to his lower chest area -2, moderate lacerations to his front right leg -2
Round two KAPRA Total: 33/50
Totals:
VIRGIL: 80/100
KATJA: 85/100
KAPRA: 73/100
And the winner is...
KATJA and VIRGIL! Kapra must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Virgil and Katja may continue fighting.
Damage:
VIRGIL- all wounds will have been healed by now, but since knock outs are involved, I shall list them: moderate bruise to her left hip, severe lacerations to her snout
KATJA- all wounds would have healed by now, but since knock outs are involved, I shall list them: moderate bruise to her right shoulder
KARA- All wounds would have healed by now, but since knockouts are involved, I shall list them: moderate bruising to the center of chest, moderate lacerations to his right foreleg, moderate bruise to his lower chest, damaged vocal cords
Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here)
Notes
For Muse
Very good, clear posts, just a few minor details.
For Tea
Very good, clear posts.
For Nyx
Try and use more complex attacks, it will earn you some more points. And remember to be super clear on the positioning of your attacks.
- By [saffie]
