Round 1
Novocaine:
7 for clarity- [-2] It doesn't seem likely to go head on with Colten and then be able to slam a shoulder in his chest. Also it'd also cause Novo more damage then the attempted attack. [-1] What damage was he intending to do with his bite?
9 for powerplaying. [-1] Must attempt to go to the left [Coltens right]
8 for defenses. [+1] for each seen
5 for attack. [3] For bite [+2] For shove.
10 for injuries.First round
Round one Novocaine Total: 39/50
Colten:
10 for clarity- Notes
10 for powerplaying. Notes
8 for defenses. [+1] for each seen
5 for attack. [+2] for paw slam, [+3] for bite.
10 for injuries.First round
Round one Colten Total: 43/50
Round 2
Novocaine:
2 for clarity- [-1] Were abouts on the leftside did Colten grab? [-2] What damage was caused? [-2] How did he readjust his position, which led to Coltens attack not being successful? [-1] Which way did he twist his neck? [-2] where did he try to slam colten?
9 for powerplaying. [-1] Must attempt to shift forwards and to the left.
1 for defenses. [+1] for each seen. You must state defenses in each post.
5 for attack. [+2] For attempted slam to Colten [+3] for attempted bite
8 for injuries. [-2] For moderate bite.
Round two NovocaineTotal: 35/50
Colten:
10 for clarity- Notes
9 for powerplaying. [-1] Must attempt to become chest to chest.
8 for defenses. [+1] for each seen
4 for attack. [+3] For thrashing head [+1] For trying to worsen injury.
5 for injuries. [-2] For bruise [-3] For bite
Round two Colten Total: 36/50
Totals:
Novocaine: 74/100
Colten: 79/100
And the winner is...
Colten Novocaine must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out.
Damage:
Novocaine- Moderate bites should take 1ooc to heal
Colten- Moderate bites should tae 1ooc week to heal, the bruises a few ic days.
Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here)
Notes
For Lolaf
Watch your clarity, there where times when you weren't very specific. Also Do more defenses in each post to get the extra points! that's what got you.
For Saff
Not much to say, I appreciate you play him inexperenced.
- By [Luisiana]
