Round 1
AMARANT:
1 for clarity: -1 did he attempt to come to a stop in front of her? -2 which way did he turn his head to try and bite her -2 where would his upper and lower jaws try and land -2 what type of damage was he intending to do to Freya’s neck -2 how did he intend to throw her off balance?
8 for powerplaying. -2 ‘ his only move was to pull her down to her right and throw her off balance’ you must attempt to do this.
4 for defences. +1 for each seen
3 for attack. +2 bite +1 pull
10 for injuries.First round
Round one AMARANT Total: 26/50
FREYA:
1 for clarity: -1 where exactly did the bite land? -2 what kind of damage did she take from the bite? -2 what did she intend to hit with her head -2 what kind of damage did she intend to do -2 how did she go from her right side to her left side?
8 for powerplaying. -2 you must specify where you intend for your attack to hit
5 for defences. +1 for each seen
2 for attack. +1 head butt +1 leg swipe
10 for injuries. First round
Round one FREYA Total: 26/50
Round 2
AMARANT:
0 for clarity: -2 how did she hit under his jaw and chin when he was biting around her scruff -2 what kind of damage did he take from her hitting him with her head. -2 when you say he started to jump around what do you mean? -2 did any of her swipes to his legs land? -2 trying to leap to the other side? I’m not sure what you mean
6 for powerplaying. -2 ‘he began to jump around, avoiding at least a few of her swipes’ you must attempt to do this. -2 ‘his weight on her shoulder would be pretty weak that she would probably wriggle herself around but might had been hard to completely knock his paw off her’ you cannot assume your paw landed or what your opponent can and cannot do.
4 for defences. +1 for each seen
1 for attack. +1 step on shoulder
8 for injuries. -1 light bruising on his chin -1 scratches on forelegs
Round two AMARANT Total: 19/50
FREYA:
6 for clarity: -2 was she trying to get free, dislodge him etc -2 how did she attempt to reach his paw? Did she lean over, roll etc.
10 for powerplaying. none seen
3 for defences. +1 for each seen
1 for attack. +1 bite to ankle
9 for injuries. -1 light bruising to top of the head
Round two FREYA Total: 29/50
Totals:
AMARANT: 45/100
FREYA: 55/100
And the winner is...
FREYA Amarant must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out.
Damage:
AMARANT: Light bruising to his chin and scratches to his forelegs will take a few OOC days to heal
FREYA: Light bruising to her head, will take a few OOC days to heal.
Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here)
Notes
For CHRONO Great fight! I know its hard playing an inexperienced fighter but you did a great job! Nothing much to note, mostly watch your clarity and power playing!
For LOLAF For you as well great fight, love that you played Freya as inexperienced and I enjoyed judging this, mostly for you just watch clarity and try some more complex attacks!
- By [DEE]
