Round 1
HATI:
9 for clarity: how high up did he try to rear? -1
8 for powerplaying. head butting while moving back down from his rear would definitely cause more damage than just a moderate bruise -2
10 for defenses. +1 for each seen
5 for attack. shoulder check +2, head butt +2, leg slam +1
10 for injuries.First round
Round one HATI Total: 42/50
BASS:
8 for clarity: Bass aimed his top and lower jaw for the right side Hati’s jaw, not sure if this is typo or not, but its confusing -2
8 for powerplaying. dropping into a bow and rising up in the same post is a lot of movement -2
10 for defenses. +1 for each seen
5 for attack. leg swipe +1, bite to muzzle +3, +1 grip attempt
10 for injuries. First Round
Round one BASS Total: 31/50
Round 2
HATI:
7 for clarity: you didn’t state the damage Hati took to his shoulder -2, how high is Hati attempting to rear? -1
10 for powerplaying. none seen
10 for defenses. +1 for each seen
5 for attack. shoulder check +2, bite to the base of the skull +3
5 for injuries. severely bruised shoulder -3, moderate puncture wounds -2
Round two HATI Total: 37/50
BASS:
9 for clarity: im not entirely sure where Hati’s shoulder landed on Bass -1
10 for powerplaying. none seen
9 for defenses. +1 for each seen
4 for attack. head thrashing +1, shoving Hati +1, swiping at Hati’s hind right leg +1, shoulder blade checking +1
6 for injuries. moderate bruise to left shoulder -2, moderate puncture wounds to shoulder blades -2
Round two BASS Total: 38/50
Round 3
HATI:
10 for clarity: clear
10 for powerplaying. none seen
10 for defenses. +1 for each seen
6 for attack. forcibly bear hugging +2, paw slam +1, bite to spine +3
5 for injuries. mild bruise to left shoulder -2, moderate gashes to his neck -2, light jaw damage -1
Round three HATI Total: 41/50
BASS:
8 for clarity: how did Bass go from head butting Hati’s throat/neck, to trying to bite it? -2
8 for powerplaying. not sure how bass could get his paws against Hati’s chest with how close they are -2
10 for defenses. +1 for each seen
5 for attack. head butt to the throat +2, bite to the throat +3
8 for injuries. moderate puncture wounds to just above his shoulder blades -2
Round three BASS Total: 39/50
Totals:
HATI: 120/150
BASS: 108/150
And the winner is...
HATI! Bass must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Rhythm now belongs to Hati/Imperium.
Damage:
Hati: severe bruise to shoulder (2 ooc weeks), moderate tears wounds to neck (1 ooc week)
Bass: severe bruise to left neck/shoulder (2 ooc weeks), moderate puncture wounds to shoulder blades (above and below) (1 ooc week)
Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here)
Notes
For Tea
Good, clear posts! Just watch out for the little details.
For Eve
Your posts were kinda confusing in this fight, though your responses were creative and different. Watch out for using to much movement in your posts and work in some bigger attacks for more points.
- By [Saffie]
