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04-06-2015, 05:52 PM (This post was last modified: 04-06-2015, 05:52 PM by The Judge.)

Aerndís vs Sigmarr and Sindri for DEATH



Round 1

Aerndís:
10 for clarity: All clear
10 for powerplaying.  None seen
10 for defences.  Head aligned with spine, tail aligned with spine, chin tucked, neck scrunched, shoulders rolled, hackles raised, limbs spread, legs bent, toes spread, claws dug into earth.
10 for attack. Shoulder slam +2, chest bump +1, Bite to eye, plus maim attempt and grip +6, paw slam +1.
10 for injuries.First round


Round one Aerndís Total: 50/50 (Holy shit, Lunar)


Sigmarr:

10 for clarity:  All clear
10 for powerplaying. None seen
10 for defences. Eyes narrowed, ears pinned, jaws parted, chin tucked to chest, tail aligned with spine, shoulders rolled, hackles raising, legs spread, weight distributed, legs bent.
9 for attack. Shoulder slam +2, Bite to throat, maim attempt and grip +6, paw slam +1
10 for injuries. First round ; moderate bruise to to center left-side chest, moderate lacerations from left eye to ear,


Round one Sigmarr Total: 49/50


Sindri:

10 for clarity:  All clear
10 for powerplaying. None seen
10 for defences. Eyes narrowing, ears flattened, hackles rose, head lowered, tail aligned with spine, legs bent, legs spread, toes spread, nails digging into the ground, shoulders rolled.
9 for attack. Paw slam +1, shoulder slam, maim attempt +3, bite to heel, maim attempt +5
10 for injuries. First round ; None? Am I seeing this right?


Round one Sindri Total: 49/50


Round 2


Aerndís:
9 for clarity: “Aern also attempted to lift her right foreleg with the intent of bringing her right forepaw down onto Sindri's left hind paw, intending to fracture the small girls toes with her massive weight.” This is just a tad bit confusing, and makes me question if she is still reared up or not. I know that you stated it further down in the post, but that's like way down there. -1
10 for powerplaying.  None seen
9 for defences.  Head aligned with spine, chin tucked, neck scrunched, shoulders rolled, hackles raised, legs spread, legs bent, weight evened out, toes spread, claws dug into earth. Weight not balanced for rearing up -1.
7 for attack. Weight shove... thing. +1, bite to spine, maim attempt +5, paw slam +1
0 for injuries. Mild bruise to center left-side chest -1, moderate bruise to center upper chest -2, moderate laceration to left cheek -3, mild bruise to to gut roll (aka bruised fat. Awl dem fats) -1, mild bruising to left hind paw -1, moderate lacerations to to left hind leg -3,


Round two Aerndís Total: 35/50


Sigmarr:

10 for clarity:  All clear
10 for powerplaying. None seen
10 for defences. Eyes narrowed, ears pinned, jaws parted, chin tucked, tail aligned with spine, shoulders rolled, neck scrunched, hackles raised, legs spread, weight evenly spread
9 for attack. Paw slam +1, shoulder slam to knee, maim attempt +3, bite to the stomach plus maim attempt +5
9 for injuries. Mild bruise to upper center of chest -1,


Round two Sigmarr Total: 48/50


Sindri:

10 for clarity:  All clear
10 for powerplaying. None seen
9 for defences. Eyes narrowed, ears tucked, hackles raised, head aligned with spine, tail tucked, legs bent, stance widened, toes spread, nails dug in earth,
9 for attack. Hip check to left shoulder +2, chest slam +2, bite to right thigh, maim attempt +5
9 for injuries. Mild bruise to base of spine -1,


Round two Sindri Total: 47/50


Totals:


Aerndís: 85/100
Sigmarr: 97/100
Sindri: 96/100

And the winner is...



Sigmarr & Sindri! Aerndís must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. DIE! Sorry... too soon?

Damage:


Aerndís: Deadface, so wounds don't really matter. Unless those carry over to the other side. Ohhh, a scarred ghost! (I'm so tired and finally done this, so I'm in a strange mood... sorry!)

Sigmarr: Moderate bruise to the center left side chest will heal in 3 OOC days, moderate laceration from left side of face from ear to eye will take 5 OOC days to heal and may scar, mild bruise to upper chest will take 1 OOC day to heal.

Sindri:

Mild bruise to the base of the spine will heal in 1 OOC days.

Notes:


Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here)

Notes


For Lunarcat7

Don't need to tell you anything, you got a freaking 50/50. You should be the one giving ME notes.

For Lazuli

You're good too! Damn gurls. For real. Can you give lessons?

And again, I am so, so sorry for taking so long. Like for real. I finally did it, and I still feel so rood for making you wait. Don't hate me, lives a bitch.

- By [Evelyn]