Rhythm v Rainbow
Rainbow vs Rhythm for Spar
ROUND ONE
RAINBOW:
5 for clarity:
- What is she trying to slam into Rhythm? Where is she trying to slam into Rhythm? What shoulder is she biting? Where is she biting on the shoulder?
10 for powerplaying.
10 for defenses.
5 for attack.
- +1 attempt to slam into Rhythm, +1 sweep Rhythm’s foreleg out from under her, +3 bite to Rhythm’s shoulder
10 for injuries.
RAINBOW'S round one total: 40/50
RHYTHM:
10 for clarity:
10 for powerplaying.
10 for defenses.
5 for attack.
- +1 jumps up underneath Rainbow, +3 bite to inner left thigh, +1 paw slam
10 for injuries.
- First round. Minimal damage to right foreleg, no point loss.
RHYTHM's round one total: 45/50
ROUND TWO
RAINBOW:
8 for clarity:
- She’s grabbing for the tail, then the hindquarters?
10 for powerplaying.
10 for defenses.
4 for attack.
- +1 throws weight down, +3 grab for Rhythm’s tail/hindquarters
7 for injuries.
- -2 moderate lacerations to inside right thigh, -1 mild bruise to toe on back left paw
RAINBOW'S round two total: 39/50
RHYTHM:
10 for clarity:
10 for powerplaying.
8 for defenses.
4 for attack.
- +3 shaking grip on Rainbow’s inner right thigh, +1 kick at underside of Rainbow’s chest
8 for injuries.
- -2 moderate lacerations left hindquarter
RHYTHM'S' round two total: 40/50
Totals:
RAINBOW: 79/100
RHYTHM: 85/100
And the winner is...
Rhythm! Rainbow must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out.
Damage:
RAINBOW:
- Moderate lacerations right inside thigh, mild bruise to back left paw, both will heal in 1 OOC week.
RHYTHM:
- Moderate lacerations to middle of right foreleg, moderate lacerations left hindquarter, will heal in 1 OOC week.
Notes:
Tips for writing and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here):
For Kat: Work on going for harsher attacks.
For Keno: Watch your wording and clarity. You lost points for leaving out specific details.
For both: Good fight!
- By [Andy]
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