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Lysis v Rhythm



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05-27-2015, 01:18 PM

LYSIS vs RHYTHM for SPAR



Lysis

ROUND ONE

LYSIS:
10 for clarity:  

  • -1 She aimed to run straight at Rhythm (How much distance is between them? How far away did she start?)
  • -2 “would aim to collide with her with all her might” (where? What part of Rhythm’s body is she trying to hit, what part of her own?)
  • Total: 7
10 for powerplaying.
  • -0
  • Total: 10
10 for defenses.
  • listed in post
0 for attack.
  • +2 Collision
  • +3 Grip attempt
  • Total: 5
10 for injuries.
  • First Round

Lysis's round one total: 42/50


RHYTMN:
10 for clarity:  

  • All Clear!
  • Total: 10
10 for powerplaying.
  • -0
  • Total: 10
10 for defenses.
  • listed in post
0 for attack.
  • +2 shoulder throw
  • +3 grip attempt
  • Total: 5
10 for injuries.
  • -2 lacerations along shoulder
  • Total: 8

Rhythm's round one total: 43/50


ROUND TWO


LYSIS:
10 for clarity:  

  • All Clear!
  • Total: 10
10 for powerplaying.
  • -1 “as she lunged forward” You need to attempt movements, especially at such close quarters.
  • Total: 9
5 for defenses.
  • listed in post
0 for attack.
  • +3 grip attempt
  • +1 toe slam
  • Total: 4
10 for injuries.
  • -1 overextension of jaw
  • -3 moderate lacerations
  • Total: 6

Lysis's round two total: 34/50


RHYTMN:
10 for clarity:  

  • All Clear!
  • Total: 10
10 for powerplaying.
  • -2 for missing/unacknowledging Lysis’ toe slam
  • Total: 8
9 for defenses.
  • listed in post
0 for attack.
  • +3 Grip/shake
  • +1 toe slam
  • +2 shove
  • Total: 6
10 for injuries.
  • -2 puncture wounds along shoulder
  • -2 unacknowledged toe slam
  • Total: 6

Rhythm's round two total: 39/50


ROUND THREE


LYSIS:
10 for clarity:  

  • All clear!
  • Total: 10
10 for powerplaying.
  • -2 missed/unacknowledged toe slam
  • Total: 8
4 for defenses.
  • listed in post
0 for attack.
  • +3 grip attempt
  • Total: 3
10 for injuries.
  • -3 moderate lacerations
  • -2 unacknowledged toe slam
  • Total: 5

Lysis's round three total: 30/50



RHYTMN:
10 for clarity:  

  • All clear!
  • Total: 10
10 for powerplaying.
  • None
  • Total: 10
8 for defenses.
  • listed in post
0 for attack.
  • +1 shove
  • +3 grip attempt
  • +2 chomp
  • Total: 6
10 for injuries.
  • -2 moderate lacerations along cheek/jaw
  • Total: 8

Rhythm's round three total: 42/50


Lysis: 106/150
Rhythm: 124/150

And the winner is...


RHYTHM! Lysis must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out.



Damage:

LYSIS:
  • Minor overextension of Jaw – 3 OOC days to heal naturally
  • moderate lacerations along base of skull – 1.5 OOC weeks to heal naturally, will scar severely unless seen by a healer
  • toe sprain along right front foot – 3 OOC days to heal naturally
RHYTHM  
  • Moderate lacerations and puncture wounds along shoulder – 1 OOC week to heal naturally
  • Minor toe sprain along left front foot – 3 OOC days to heal naturally
  • moderate lacerations along cheek – 1 OOC week to heal naturally
Notes:


Tips for writing and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here):

Well done for the fights! The only real thing for both of you is to make sure you don’t miss or skip over any moves, such as toe slams. I know they probably aren’t the most…severe of attacks, but just keep an eye out. Great job both of you!

For Nyx: Good fight! Watch for defenses, you never quite made it to 10 in most of the rounds. Those are very easy points that you could get just by keeping a checklist. Please watch you damage and your attempts, but otherwise you were perfect!

For Kat: Great job as well! You had some great counters, and most often all the defenses. Also watch for damage and acknowledge every move of your opponent.

- By [Arin]