-1 She aimed to run straight at Rhythm (How much distance is between them? How far away did she start?)
-2 “would aim to collide with her with all her might” (where? What part of Rhythm’s body is she trying to hit, what part of her own?)
Total: 7
10 for powerplaying.
-0
Total: 10
10 for defenses.
listed in post
0 for attack.
+2 Collision
+3 Grip attempt
Total: 5
10 for injuries.
First Round
Lysis's round one total: 42/50
RHYTMN: 10 for clarity:
All Clear!
Total: 10
10 for powerplaying.
-0
Total: 10
10 for defenses.
listed in post
0 for attack.
+2 shoulder throw
+3 grip attempt
Total: 5
10 for injuries.
-2 lacerations along shoulder
Total: 8
Rhythm's round one total: 43/50
ROUND TWO
LYSIS: 10 for clarity:
All Clear!
Total: 10
10 for powerplaying.
-1 “as she lunged forward” You need to attempt movements, especially at such close quarters.
Total: 9
5 for defenses.
listed in post
0 for attack.
+3 grip attempt
+1 toe slam
Total: 4
10 for injuries.
-1 overextension of jaw
-3 moderate lacerations
Total: 6
Lysis's round two total: 34/50
RHYTMN: 10 for clarity:
All Clear!
Total: 10
10 for powerplaying.
-2 for missing/unacknowledging Lysis’ toe slam
Total: 8
9 for defenses.
listed in post
0 for attack.
+3 Grip/shake
+1 toe slam
+2 shove
Total: 6
10 for injuries.
-2 puncture wounds along shoulder
-2 unacknowledged toe slam
Total: 6
Rhythm's round two total: 39/50
ROUND THREE
LYSIS: 10 for clarity:
All clear!
Total: 10
10 for powerplaying.
-2 missed/unacknowledged toe slam
Total: 8
4 for defenses.
listed in post
0 for attack.
+3 grip attempt
Total: 3
10 for injuries.
-3 moderate lacerations
-2 unacknowledged toe slam
Total: 5
Lysis's round three total: 30/50
RHYTMN: 10 for clarity:
All clear!
Total: 10
10 for powerplaying.
None
Total: 10
8 for defenses.
listed in post
0 for attack.
+1 shove
+3 grip attempt
+2 chomp
Total: 6
10 for injuries.
-2 moderate lacerations along cheek/jaw
Total: 8
Rhythm's round three total: 42/50
Lysis: 106/150 Rhythm: 124/150
And the winner is...
RHYTHM! Lysis must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out.
Damage:
LYSIS:
Minor overextension of Jaw – 3 OOC days to heal naturally
moderate lacerations along base of skull – 1.5 OOC weeks to heal naturally, will scar severely unless seen by a healer
toe sprain along right front foot – 3 OOC days to heal naturally
RHYTHM
Moderate lacerations and puncture wounds along shoulder – 1 OOC week to heal naturally
Minor toe sprain along left front foot – 3 OOC days to heal naturally
moderate lacerations along cheek – 1 OOC week to heal naturally
Notes:
Tips for writing and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here):
Well done for the fights! The only real thing for both of you is to make sure you don’t miss or skip over any moves, such as toe slams. I know they probably aren’t the most…severe of attacks, but just keep an eye out. Great job both of you!
For Nyx: Good fight! Watch for defenses, you never quite made it to 10 in most of the rounds. Those are very easy points that you could get just by keeping a checklist. Please watch you damage and your attempts, but otherwise you were perfect!
For Kat: Great job as well! You had some great counters, and most often all the defenses. Also watch for damage and acknowledge every move of your opponent.
