Quiet is the Night
05-27-2015, 03:22 PM
(This post was last modified: 05-27-2015, 04:31 PM by The Judge.)
Katja v Savage for Force Claim
ROUND ONE
Savage:
7 for clarity:
- Where on the snout/muzzle is he biting? Where are his jaws hoping to land? How are they angled? How much pressure is he applying?
10 for powerplaying.
3 for defenses.
4 for attack.
- +3 bite to muzzle
- +1 paw stomp
10 for injuries.
Savage’s round one total: 34/50
Katja:
10 for clarity:
10 for powerplaying.
10 for defenses.
6 for attack.
- +3 attempt to dislocate with shoulder jab
- +3 bite to his right foreleg
10 for injuries.
- First round. No points off. Minor welt, moderate lacerations to base of neck above right shoulder, minor bruising to front of right shoulder
Katja’s round one total: 46/50
ROUND TWO
Savage:
8 for clarity:
- Where is he hoping for his jaws to land around her eye?
10 for powerplaying.
6 for defenses.
4 for attack.
- +4 maim attempt to right eye
5 for injuries.
- -2 shoulder contusion
- -3 right foreleg laceration
Savage’s round two total: 33/50
Katja:
10 for clarity:
10 for powerplaying.
10 for defenses.
5 for attack.
- +4 attempt to break lower jaw
- +1 paw slam
10 for injuries.
- No new injuries this round due to successful counter
Katja’s round two total: 45/50
Totals:
Savage: 67/100
Katja: 91/100
And the winner is...
Katja! Savage is now the property of Yfir. The fight is now over, although Savage may reply and determine how Katja's counter attack on his jaw lands.
Damage:
Savage:
- Shoulder contusion will take 1 OOC week to heal
- Right foreleg laceration will take 2 OOC weeks to heal and ought to be seen by a healer
Katja:
- Minor welt to foreleg will take 3 OOC days to heal
- Moderate lacerations to neck above right shoulder will take 1 OOC week to heal and will scar unless seen by a healer
- Minor bruising to right shoulder will heal in 5 OOC days
Notes:
Tips for writing and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here):
For Trinket: Watch your clarity, be very very specific whenever possible. Also work on incorporating more defenses into your posts.
For Tealah: You did really, really well.
- By [Andy]
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