How does tilting his body to the side change where Arian's attack lands? I think you meant to say shifted or moved.
"seek to land a bite to where the leg connects to the body." Which leg are you referring to? She has two on that side, her front and her back.
10 for powerplaying.
10 for defenses.
4 for attack.
+3 bite to her leg
+1 trying to swipe her right back leg out from under her
10 for injuries.
First round.
Kreft's round one total: 41/50
ROUND TWO
Arian: 7 for clarity:
Kreft was tugging at her back right leg, which isn't her useless one. Also, did it do any damage? Did it unbalance her? You didn't say.
10 for powerplaying.
10 for defenses.
3 for attack.
+3 bite for spine just above where his tail begins
8 for injuries.
-1 nipped end of tail, lost fur
-1 leg swipe not addressed
Arian's round two total: 38/50
Kreft: 10 for clarity:
10 for powerplaying.
I could have taken off for him 'dashing around' but since it didn't technically happen because the rounds are completed, I'll refrain from doing so. But, in the future, don't ever have your wolf dash completely around another wolf, it's usually considered too much movement for a single post.
4 for defenses.
Make sure you list all of your defenses in each round, these are easy points.
0 for attack.
Your attack is entirely subject to a whole new round since it occurs only if Arian lets go of his back. You should have done something different, as him 'dashing around to her other side' is too much movement in one post and can't be counted.
8 for injuries.
-2 moderate wound to spine, lower back
Kreft's round two total: 32/50
Totals:
Arian: 82/100 Kreft: 73/100
And the winner is...
Arian! Kreft must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out.
Damage:
Arian:
Nipped end of tail/lost fur - doesn't need healer attention and will heal in a matter of days
Mild wounds to her back right leg - will heal in a matter of days
Kreft:
Moderate wounds to lower back/spine - will heal in 1 OOC week, longer if not seen by a healer
Notes:
Tips for writing and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here):
