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insömnia



Eldarwen


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06-10-2015, 04:04 AM
Hi there welcome to Ala, unfortunately there are a few things that need to be changed before your character can be accepted.

First one, is your ooc name going to be Tigress or Imsonia? At the moment the profile and form don't match so pick one and amend the correct place.

Next, for a character to be 39" you will need to purchase extra height from the gem store. A character can be a maximum of 36" for free so as you are new and have no gems yet you'll have to make her a little shorter.

As for her appearance, magma is a colour that has to be paid for. The diamond marking too is one that might need paying for. Do you have an image reference of her at all as sometimes that helps to clear up things?

Also just thought I'd point out to you that an embryo is a developing baby what I believe you meant is iris (and neither of these things actually glow)

The personality does need more than just a list of words, explain how each of these things fit together to make insömnia herself.