- 2 “As he lifted his paws to take his next step, he’d instead want to continue lifting his front legs” (How close to Katja is he? Must be close enough to wrap his legs around her but it’s not stated.
+ 1 leg grab
+ 2 body throw attempt
+ 3 bite to adominal attempt
+ 1 grasp attempt
Total: 7
INJURIES
- First Round!
Total: 10
Total for Round One: 47 / 50
ROUND TWO
FRITH
CLARITY
- 1 “The man would seek to pivot on his front right leg” (Did he hop? Did he slide? What did his other 3 legs do? How was this movement attained?)
- 2 “To slam the point of his right shoulder into her soft middle of her left belly” (You said you were in a T shape. Did you pivot or turn or duck in order to shove your shoulder into her belly?)
+ 3 shoulder to throat
+ 3 jaw bite
+ 1 maim/severity
+ 1 leg grab
Total: 8
INJURIES
- 1 mild scratches to left foreleg
- 2 moderate lacerations along hip
Total: 7
Total for Round Two: 45 / 50
Totals:
FRITH
45 + 42 = 87 / 100
KATJA
47 + 45 = 92 / 100
And the winner is...
KATJA
Frith must give up by submitting, fleeing or passing out.
Damage:
FRITH
- mild bruising to shoulder - 1 OOC week to heal
KATJA
- slight bruising to left shoulder - 1 OOC week to heal
- moderate bruise between shoulders - 1 OOC week to heal
- mild scratches to left foreleg - 1 OOC week to heal
- moderate lacerations to left hip - 2 OOC week to heal
Notes:
Tips for writing and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here):
KAT
I was blown away by you, missy! You did amazing in this fight, your moves were very creative and your dodges were realistic. The only thing I'd offer for you to work on is being very clear how you are moving, and to make sure the attack makes sense with the positioning. That's about it! Keep being epic. :D
Tea
Holy cow you both are such beasts! I really don't know what to give you here. Your attacks were very creative, and I absolutely loved reading them. The dodges made sense, too, which is hard to do. Keep being beast!
