- 2 "The last attack was to bite the left side of Esti's face" (wasnt it a bite to the neck?)
- 1 "with only the left of Valentine's teeth hitting her skin" (If Valentine's head was swung around for the neck, even if they were face to face, wouldnt that swing cause more than just the left side of his teeth to hit? The swing wouldn't make them cheek to cheek...?)
- 1 light bruise along chest
- 1 light scrapes along left forefoot
Total: 8
Total for Round Two: 45 / 50
Totals:
VALENTINE
47 + 46 = 93 / 100
ESTI
44 + 45 = 89 / 100
And the winner is...
VALENTINE
ESTI must give up by submitting, fleeing or passing out.
Damage:
VALENTINE
- minor scrapes to left ear = 1 ooc week to heal
- minor scrape to ankle = 1 ooc week to heal
- moderate bruising to left shoulder = 2 ooc week to heal
- slight bruising along chest = 1 ooc week to heal
ESTI
- moderate bruising to right shoulder = 2 ooc weeks to heal fully
- slight scratches to right paw webbing = 1 ooc week to heal
- moderate lacerations to muzzle = 2 ooc weeks to heal fully
- slight bruising to chest = 1 ooc week
- minor scrapes to left forepaw ankle = 1 ooc week
Notes:
Tips for writing and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here):
LAZ
I have done a few of these for you, and really I know have much to say any more. You attacks and responses are usually very creative …. I really dont have much to say here.
ESTI
Watch where the attacks are landing or were meant to land. By saying a neck bite is a face bite could be counted as powerplay. This also means that if you move, you should make sure where the attack land makes sense. In this spar i think it was because you mistook it as a facebite, but for future reference! Keep up the great work :D