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08-07-2015, 11:28 AM

VALENTINE vs ESTI for SPAR



ROUND ONE


Valentine

CLARITY
- All Clear!
Total: 10

POWERPLAY
- 0
Total: 10

DEFENSES
+ 1 (ears) + 1 (eyes) + 1 (lips) + 1 (hackles) + 1 (head) + 1 (tail) + 1 (stance) + 1 (knees) + 1 (toes) + 1 (nails)
Total: 10

ATTACK
+ 2 Shoulder ram
+ 1 paw slam/pin
+ 3 bite to neck
+ 1 grip attempt
Total: 7

INJURIES
- First Round
Total: 10

Total for Round One: 47 / 50


ESTI

CLARITY
- 2 "The last attack was to bite the left side of Esti's face" (wasnt it a bite to the neck?)
- 1 "with only the left of Valentine's teeth hitting her skin" (If Valentine's head was swung around for the neck, even if they were face to face, wouldnt that swing cause more than just the left side of his teeth to hit? The swing wouldn't make them cheek to cheek...?)
Total: 7

POWERPLAY
- 0
Total: 10

DEFENSES
+ 1 (stance) + 1 (knees) + 1 (toes) + 1 (nails) + 1 (lips) + 1 (eyes) + 1 (ears) + 1 (head) + 1 (hackles) + 1 (face) + 1 (tail)
Total: 10

ATTACK
+ 3 ear bite attempt
+1 grab attempt
+1 leg hook
+2 body slam
Total: 7

INJURIES
- Round 1!
Total: 10

Total for Round One: 44 / 50


ROUND TWO


VALENTINE

CLARITY
- All clear!
Total: 10

POWERPLAY
- 0
Total: 10

DEFENSES
+ 1 (stance) + 1 (knees) + 1 (toes) + 1 (nails) + 1 (hackles) + 1 (tail) + 1 (shoulders) + 1 (head) + 1 (chin) + 1 (eyes) + 1 (ears)
Total: 10

ATTACK
+ 3 shoulder to throat shove
+ 1 paw slam/pin
+ 3 throat attempt
+ 1 grab attempt
Total: 8

INJURIES
- 1 minor scratches to left ear
- 1 minor scrapes to ankle
Total: 8

Total for Round Two: 46 / 50

ESTI

CLARITY
- All clear!
Total: 10

POWERPLAY
- 0
Total: 10

DEFENSES
+ 1 (balance) + 1 (head) + 1 (shoulders) + 1 (eyes) + 1 (ears) + 1 (tail) + 1 (hackles) + 1 (weight) + 1 (knees) + 1 (chin)
Total: 10

ATTACK
+ 1 paw stomp
+ 3 throat grip
+ 1 grip attempt
+ 2 shoulder to shoulder
Total: 7

INJURIES
- 1 light bruise along chest
- 1 light scrapes along left forefoot
Total: 8

Total for Round Two: 45 / 50


Totals:


VALENTINE
47 + 46 = 93 / 100

ESTI
44 + 45 = 89 / 100


And the winner is...

VALENTINE
ESTI must give up by submitting, fleeing or passing out.




Damage:

VALENTINE
- minor scrapes to left ear = 1 ooc week to heal
- minor scrape to ankle = 1 ooc week to heal
- moderate bruising to left shoulder = 2 ooc week to heal
- slight bruising along chest = 1 ooc week to heal

ESTI
- moderate bruising to right shoulder = 2 ooc weeks to heal fully
- slight scratches to right paw webbing = 1 ooc week to heal
- moderate lacerations to muzzle = 2 ooc weeks to heal fully
- slight bruising to chest = 1 ooc week
- minor scrapes to left forepaw ankle = 1 ooc week

Notes:

Tips for writing and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here):

LAZ
I have done a few of these for you, and really I know have much to say any more. You attacks and responses are usually very creative …. I really dont have much to say here.


ESTI
Watch where the attacks are landing or were meant to land. By saying a neck bite is a face bite could be counted as powerplay. This also means that if you move, you should make sure where the attack land makes sense. In this spar i think it was because you mistook it as a facebite, but for future reference! Keep up the great work :D

- By [Arin]