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08-23-2015, 12:12 PM

LAUFEY vs MIKSA for RAID



ROUND ONE


Laufey

CLARITY
- 2 "Kicking forward suddenly, Laufey attempted to close the distance between himself and his opponent" (How much distance is between them? How much reaction time does Miksa have?)

Total: 8

POWERPLAY
- 0
Total: 10

DEFENSES
+ 1 (stance) + 1 (knees) + 1 (toes) + 1 (nails) + 1 (hackles) + 1 (tail) + 1 (ears) + 1 (eyes) + 1 (lips) + 1 (shoulders)
Total: 10

ATTACK
+ 2 left shoulder ram
+ 1 paw slam
+ 3 left neck grab
+ 1 grip attempt
Total: 7

INJURIES
- First round!
Total: 10

Total for Round One: 45 / 50


Miksa

CLARITY
- All clear!
Total: 10

POWERPLAY
- 0
Total: 10

DEFENSES
+ 1 (stance) + 1 (knees) + 1 (toes) + 1 (claws) + 1 (head) + 1 (shoulders) + 1 (tail) + 1 (eyes) + 1 (ears)
Total: 9

ATTACK
+ 3 bite attempt to left shoulder
+ 1 grip attempt
Total: 4

INJURIES
- First round!
Total: 10

Total for Round One: 43 / 50


ROUND TWO


Laufey

CLARITY
- All clear!
Total: 10

POWERPLAY
- 0
Total: 10

DEFENSES
+ 1 (hackles) + 1 (lips) + 1 (ears) + 1 (eyes) + 1 (stance) + 1 (toes) + 1 (Nails) + 1 (knees) + 1 (tail) + 1 (balance)
Total: 10

ATTACK
+ 3 head thrash/worsen damage
+ 1 paw stomp
+ 2 body shove to left shoulder/chest
Total: 6

INJURIES
- 1 bruise to left shoulder
- 2 moderate punctures to left shoulder
Total: 7

Total for Round Two: 43 / 50

Miksa

CLARITY
- All clear!
Total: 10

POWERPLAY
- 0
Total: 10

DEFENSES
+ 1 (lips) + 1 (eyes) + 1 (ears) + 1 (balance) + 1 (knees) + 1 (shoudlers) + 1 (tail) + 1 (toes) + 1 (claws) + 1 (gravity)
Total: 10

ATTACK
+ 3 bite to left shoulder
Total: 3

INJURIES
- 3 severe lacerations to jaw
- 1 moderate bruising to left forepaw
Total: 6

Total for Round Two: 39 / 50


Totals:


LAUFEY
45 + 43 = 88 / 100

MIKSA
43 + 39 = 82 / 100


And the winner is...

LAUFEY
Miksa must give up by submitting, fleeing or passing out.




Damage:

LAUFEY
- light bruise to left shoulder - 1 OOC week max to heal fully
- moderate punctures to left shoulder - 2 OOC weeks to heal fully

MIKSA
- slight bruise to left shoulder - 1 OOC week
- Moderate cuts/bruises to left forepaw - 1 OOC week
- severe lacerations to left of jaw, starting at ear to joint. 3-4 OOC weeks to heal completely and requires a healer.

Notes:

Tips for writing and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here):

LAZ
Excellent spar! The only thing I want to mention is that you should always say how much distance is between yourself and your opponent, if only to give them the correct ammount of reaction time. :)

Mouser
Great spar! Excellent emotion and psychological responses, amazing outlines of realistic injury as well! What got you was the lack of attacks, though I could tell that ICly Miksa wasn't the most confident sparer. Good job.

- By [Arin]