+ 2 shoulder ram
+ 1 right to right foreleg grab
+ 3 bite to left shoulder
Total: 6
INJURIES
- First round!
Total: 10
Total for Round One: 44 / 50
Varda
CLARITY
- 2 "Varda lifted her right forepaw only to blindly attempt to stomp on her opponent's right forepaw" (Warja stated this move was directly during/split second after the shoulder throw. How did Varda have enough time to get shoved back/stumble, look at Warja, attempt to stomp during this small time frame AND duck her remaining attack?)
Total: 8
POWERPLAY
- 2 "During this process she would attempt to yank the limb to her" (This is a nested attack with slight PP. Not only would you have to assume the bite landed for this "process" to work (the PP) but you also didn't give your opponent enough time to react. You must be sure the bite lands (aka, they respond with a move) before you try to worsen it.)
+ 2 shoulder to nose
+ 1 left to left paw slam
+ 3 bite attempt to forehead
Total: 6
INJURIES
- 1 slight spraining to left forepaw
- 2 moderate lacerations to left shoulder
Total: 7
Total for Round Two: 43 / 50
Varda
CLARITY
- 2 "before her opponent's left forefoot successfully pinned her own left forefoot, Varda quickly.." (How in the world did you have enough time to bite attempt Warja's left shoulder AND! move to dodge the remaining attempts?)
- 2 "With a pause after the repositioning, she attempted to slam..." (How? With what force? Did you have momentum? Without properly explaining the force behind it, the "slam" could easily be just a shove that doesn't leave any damage.)
- 2 "seeking to grip her opponents lower scruff" (You didn't give enough time to respond to your other bite.)
Total: 4
POWERPLAY
- 2 "Multiple attacks" (You cannot bite, move then bite again. That is assuming your previous bite landed and you don't give your opponent enough time to respond.)
- 2 "Over/unrealistic dodges" (In this move particularly, you dodge practically everything that realistically couldn't have been dodging. By letting one move of a simaltaneous attack land, then attacking your own AND moving to dodge the other attacks (that would have landed during your attack realistically) you are in essance powerplaying. There is only a few seconds per round, and in those few seconds you can only do so much. Taking realistic damage is so much better than unrealistically dodging everything.)
+ 3 bite to left shoulder
+ 2 shove to right shoulder
+ 3 bite to scruff
Total: 8
INJURIES
- 2 severe nose bruise
- 1 slight lacerations to neck
Total: 7
Total for Round Two: 34 / 50
Totals:
WARJA
44 + 43 = 87 / 100
VARDA
40 + 34 = 74 / 100
And the winner is...
WAJA
Varda must give up by submitting, fleeing or passing out.
Damage:
WARJA
- slight spraining to right forefoot - 1 OOC week to heal fully and tender to walk on
- moderate lacerations to left shoulder - 2 OOC weeks to heal fully, might require a healer
VARDA
- Moderate bruise to right shoulder - 1 OOC week to heal fully
- Severe nose bruise - 2 OOC weeks to heal fully plus dampened sense of smell untill healed
- Slight lacerations to neck - 2 OOC weeks to heal fully, might require a healer
Notes:
Tips for writing and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here):
Laz
Excellent once again, just watch those distances!
Millie
You did well in this spar as well! Just be careful of movements and time. There's only so many seconds per round and you MUST give your opponent enough time to react to one attack. Over dodging is also an issue, especially when done in unrealistic ways. Allow your wolf to get injured, you lose a whole lot less points than if you go to unrealistic measures not too. Keep it to one attack per body part per round (1 bite, one throw, one paw-type attack) and you'll be fine!
