Joining { 04/28/17 }
04-28-2017, 10:06 PM
(This post was last modified: 04-29-2017, 12:17 PM by Daela.)
Out-of-Character Name: Pada
Age: 18.
Character's Name: Daela Marron
Character Age: 7 Years
Season of Birth: Summer
Adult Height: 24 Inches
Build: Light
Appearance Description: Blending of greyish silver tones on a black base coat, her face is white and "grizzled" by age. Right ear is folded to her head from an injury, her eyes are a golden shade. Her coat is longer on the neck, stomach, chest and legs.
Skills: Healing and Intellect.
Proof of Purchases: http://ardently.org/showthread.php?tid=4491&pid=132133#pid132133
NEW MEMBERS ONLY!: Small companion. Paddox, male Raven. Black in coloring, 57 cm tall with a wingspan of 107 cm.
Age: 18.
Character's Name: Daela Marron
Character Age: 7 Years
Season of Birth: Summer
Adult Height: 24 Inches
Build: Light
Appearance Description: Blending of greyish silver tones on a black base coat, her face is white and "grizzled" by age. Right ear is folded to her head from an injury, her eyes are a golden shade. Her coat is longer on the neck, stomach, chest and legs.
Skills: Healing and Intellect.
Proof of Purchases: http://ardently.org/showthread.php?tid=4491&pid=132133#pid132133
NEW MEMBERS ONLY!: Small companion. Paddox, male Raven. Black in coloring, 57 cm tall with a wingspan of 107 cm.
04-29-2017, 11:59 AM
Hi there!
This is looking great! Just a few things here that need to be touched up:
- 115 cm is too large for a small companion. Their wingspan may not exceed 42 inches (107 cm) which does fall into a ravens natural wingspan. You just need to alter how wide it is. <3
- You don't actually need to post in the gemstone store! Thank you for doing that though. You'll just need to add the companion description where it says 'new member pass.'
- The build 'small' does not fall into our build catagories, which are broken down here! I know our guidebook can be daunting, it's what happens when you're around for so long!
Once these points are fixed, please reply to this thread so we can take another look. ^-^
This is looking great! Just a few things here that need to be touched up:
- 115 cm is too large for a small companion. Their wingspan may not exceed 42 inches (107 cm) which does fall into a ravens natural wingspan. You just need to alter how wide it is. <3
- You don't actually need to post in the gemstone store! Thank you for doing that though. You'll just need to add the companion description where it says 'new member pass.'
- The build 'small' does not fall into our build catagories, which are broken down here! I know our guidebook can be daunting, it's what happens when you're around for so long!
Once these points are fixed, please reply to this thread so we can take another look. ^-^
04-30-2017, 01:44 PM
Welcome to Ardent!
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