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Starbreeze



Starbreeze


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12-29-2013, 04:19 PM
OOC Name: Kita
How did you get here?: Browsing Web
Age:17



Character's Name:Starbreeze
Age: 1 year
Season of birth:Summer
Size: (in inches)32
Appearance description:Starbreeze is 5 feet long, from nose to tip of tail and 5 feet tall from the ground. She has long curly black fur that caresses her paws and underbelly, also along her face. She has the ear length of a jackal, thanks to her Egyptian jackal mother. She has soft brown eyes that are filled with curiosity and a pale pink nose. She has Egyptian type markings along her eyes, ears, paws and tail that are white. She is seen always with a small silver bunny with one dark blue eye and a pale pink eye she named Anamore.



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01-02-2014, 12:12 PM
A few things are wrong with your app and profile.

1. The image you chose for the avatar is an image that you cannot use, since it is copyrighted and from a comic.

2. She cannot be half jackal, since hybrids must be purchased in the shop with gems (the website currency you earn by making posts)

3. She cannot be five feet tall, as it equals 60 inches, not 32 inches.

4. She cannot have Egyptian markings, as odd markings must be purchased.

5. She cannot have a companion until it is purchased.

6. The personality needs two separated paragraphs with at least five sentences in each one. To separate paragraphs on your profile, put < p > (with no spaces) in front of each paragraph.

After all that is fixed, i will go over your app again :)