SEVEN NATION ARMY
11-10-2013, 07:54 PM
GITAN v ARGENT for SEIGE Round 1
Gitan: 7 for clarity- Your attack wasn?t very clear at all. Where on her side is he planning to hit her? What part of his body is he hoping to use to hit her? At what angle is he approaching? What shape will their bodies make upon impact? Be descriptive. 10 for powerplaying. Notes 8 for defenses. ears flattened, hackles raised, tail out, eyes narrowed, claws dug in. 5 for attack. ?The man would attempt to slam into her right side, trying to knock her off balance, should that succeed he would then attempt to rise up top of her and grab her scruff.? Attack is limited. Also, try not to do ?if, then? attacks. Instead, focus on doing simultaneous maneuvers that can be played out easier. 10 for injuries.First round Round one Gitan Total: 40/50 Argent: 10 for clarity- Notes 8 for powerplaying. ?Such a motion would deny him any balance upon her shoulder. His left would miss completely due to the angle she?d moved to, and thus the silver knight was not pushed to the ground, for she?d only received half of his intended attack and she was of larger size than he was.? The wording here comes off as powerplaying-ish, though I know that wasn?t your intention. Try to say these things in a less matter-of-fact way, if possible. Otherwise, just focus on what your own character is doing. 10 for defenses. Legs spread equally, limbs bent, weight distributed, claws dug in, toes spread, center of gravity lowered, hackles raised, tail lashing, head lowered, shoulders rolling, neck scrunching, chin tucked, jaws parted, eyes narrowed, ears pinned. 8 for attack. Shoulder going for his shoulder, head seeking to bite one of his foremost ribs. 10 for injuries.First round Round one Argent Total: 46/50 Round 2
Gitan: 10 for clarity- Notes 6 for powerplaying. Far, far too much movement in this post. He can?t simply run from her and make a full circuit around her to her backside without giving her a chance to respond. 8 for defenses. Tail out, eyes narrowed, ears back, hackles raised, claws dug in. 6 for attack. ?attempting to snare at her flank on the left side?, then tries to bite at her back leg. Powerplaying issue dealt with in the proper section. 6 for injuries. What injuries did she leave on his ribs? You mentioned a bite to his skin, but how severe? Round two Gitan Total: 36/50 Argent: 10 for clarity- Notes 10 for powerplaying. Notes 10 for defenses. ?legs spread apart equally, weight evenly distributed, limbs bent, center of gravity lowered, toes spread, claws gripping the soil beneath her, tail lashing out behind her, hackles raised, shoulders rolled, head lowered to align with her spine, neck scrunched, chin tucked, jaws parted, eyes narrowed and ears pinned back.? 10 for attack. pushed forward to intercept him, jaws snapping toward his spine, head shaking. 7 for injuries. I feel like you could have taken damage from the first part of his attack, even while countering his move around her body to her backside. Round two Argent Total: 47/50 Totals:
Gitan: 76/100 Argent: 93/100 And the winner is...
Argent! Gitan must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. He may no longer participate in the siege, and is officially knocked out. Damage:
Gitan- Three mild lacerations on ribs that will heal in approximately 3 OOC days. Moderate bruising on side that will heal in approximately 1 OOC week. Argent- Three mild lacerations on left side (from Gitan?s last attack) that will heal in 3 OOC days. Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) Good fight, guys! If you want further comments contact Andy. - By [Andy]
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11-11-2013, 09:53 AM
SATIS & KUSUGRA v OBSIDIAN Round 1
Satis: 10 for clarity- Notes 10 for powerplaying. Notes 10 for defenses. Eyes narrowed, limbs square, weight equalizing, spine aligned, tail tucked, abdomen tense, elbows bent, chest slightly lowered, toes splayed, claws digging for traction, shoulders rolled, chin tucked, hackles raised, ears pinned, jaws ready. 8 for attack. skull turning to the right to bite at the area around Obsidian?s right eye, jaws aiming at a ligament on Obsidian?s left hind limb 7 for injuries. torn hair between the shoulder blades, mildly bleeding Round one Satis Total: 45/50 Obsidian: 10 for clarity- Notes 10 for powerplaying. Notes 4 for defenses. ears pinned, tail clamped 7 for attack. two kicks aimed for Kusugra 7 for injuries. small gash beneath right eye, feel like you could have taken something from Satis? attempt to bite at her, as it would have happened fairly quickly. Round one Obsidian Total: 38/50 Kusugra: 10 for clarity- Notes 10 for powerplaying. Notes 10 for defenses. ?While on her back his ears were folded against his skull, eyes were squinted slightly, chin was tucked, and lips were curled to expose his fangs. His entire pelt flared for extra padding, and his shoulders rolled to protect the sides of his throat and neck. His abdomen remained tense, his body was slightly curved to align with the curves of her rump, his tail was out and curved slightly to assist with his balance, his claws were extended, and his toes were splayed to assist in gripping as much flesh as possible. When he had been bucked off, he had closed his jaw to protect his teeth from any possible kick, had pulled his legs close to his body to protect them from any lashes, and had relaxed his body to prepare for the grounds impact. Once standing up again his legs evenly parted, his knees slightly bent, his head leveled with his spine, his tail leveled with his spine, his claws extended to grip the earth, and his toes splayed.? 7 for attack. biting anywhere he can reach, digging claws in before release. 6 for injuries. Keep in mind a cat of his size hitting the ground three feet away from impact would certainly daze him as well as cause moderate-severe bruising. Round one Kusugra Total: 43/50 Totals:
Satis: 45/50 Obsidian: 38/50 Kusugra: 43/50 And the winner is...
Satis & Kusugra! Obsidian must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out and may no longer participate in the siege. Damage:
Satis- Fur loss between shoulders will result in swelling, mild bleeding. Should heal in approximately 1 OOC week. Fur regrowth will take longer. Obsidian- Deep gashes in hips from Kusugra?s claws, mild bite on rump where the cat managed a glancing blow amongst the bucking. All will be healed in approximately 1 OOC week. Kusugra- Severe bruising on the side where he landed (will affect mobility), moderate bruising elsewhere during his rolling, etc. Will heal in 1 OOC week. Notes:
Tips for writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) Good fight, I had to assume some of the injuries as it was a single-round fight, so I hope they are acceptable. As usual, contact me with any questions, concerns, comments. - By [Andy]
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11-11-2013, 12:52 PM
He would fall, as she had expected he would. Argent was no fool when it came to battle and war, and she had yet to obtain serious injury. Adrenaline coursed through her veins, powerful and sweet, and the silver knight would not give pause. Crimson gaze flickered to the russet-kissed ruler of the pack, and she felt compelled to make her bow. She?d attempted to humiliate Argent before, offering her to step down and then sending her little slave after her, as if to say you are weak in mind and in body, and the Queen would make her pay. Defenses settled into place; legs spread equally apart, weight evenly distributed, toes spread, claws biting into the ground, shoulders rolling, limbs bent, center of gravity lowered, tail lashing out behind her, hackles raised, head lowered to align with her spine, neck scrunched, chin tucked, jaws parted, eyes narrowed and ears pinned back.
She would charge, hoping to go head on. Argent desired to close the distance, her legs pumping powerfully beneath her as she pulled closer and closer. She hoped to be close when her front legs lifted off the ground, weight redistributing to her hind ones. Her left paw sought to slam down on Chrysanthe?s muzzle, hoping to make the woman?s head bow down at an awkward angle, and her forward momentum hoping to push it back, hopefully straining her neck and leaving the silver knight with access to her real goal. At the same time her jaws were striking forward, bottom jaw seeking to bite into Chrysanthe?s left eye, top hoping to hook just above the socket, hopefully delivering the woman into a world of darkness.
She?d already felled three opponents, and power surged through her veins. I will make you pay, wench. Already Glaciem had felled more opponents than Valhalla had, and blinding their Queen would only further cement what seemed to be a potential victory.
ARGENT vs. CHRYSANTHE for MAIM (BLINDING IN ONE EYE)
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She would charge, hoping to go head on. Argent desired to close the distance, her legs pumping powerfully beneath her as she pulled closer and closer. She hoped to be close when her front legs lifted off the ground, weight redistributing to her hind ones. Her left paw sought to slam down on Chrysanthe?s muzzle, hoping to make the woman?s head bow down at an awkward angle, and her forward momentum hoping to push it back, hopefully straining her neck and leaving the silver knight with access to her real goal. At the same time her jaws were striking forward, bottom jaw seeking to bite into Chrysanthe?s left eye, top hoping to hook just above the socket, hopefully delivering the woman into a world of darkness.
She?d already felled three opponents, and power surged through her veins. I will make you pay, wench. Already Glaciem had felled more opponents than Valhalla had, and blinding their Queen would only further cement what seemed to be a potential victory.
ARGENT vs. CHRYSANTHE for MAIM (BLINDING IN ONE EYE)
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11-11-2013, 02:35 PM
ooc;; sorry to drag this out and make this maybe uncomprehendable drunk post to try and not default <3 also not gonna list everything, I'm loosing track, sorry :/ long story short being that he's really hurt and going for Collision's neck
Despite the fact that his mind was beginning to cloud and waiver Collision couldn?t have been clearer. Every sense trained on the slightly larger male as they faced off. Sounds of battle raged around them, the cries of pain, fear and anger at first echoing around him and then slowly fading into the background. Blood dripped freely from his various wounds, though his skull bled the most profusely, the veins close to the top of the skin all broken and as his heart continued to beat chaotically and pump blood at a quickened pace and pressure to the wounds. He could feel the blood loss, knew it was affecting him but all he could do was focus on his opponent. The other two who had been attacking him faded into the background as he remained as he had positioned himself for when Collision attacked. Though it all probably lasted a few seconds time seemed to lapse on for forever as each male set their defenses.
And then everything happened all at once, the male who was easily as big as his father came barreling at him and Vixe began to move out of the way. The distance between them, though, had been gauged poorly and was much smaller then he had originally thought. All at once the male was there and sickly green eyes widened in surprise. Head moved to dart out of the way, thankfully saving his eye but teeth tore into the top of his muzzle and his cheek. As he continued to try and pull away move flesh was torn, a huge gouge being drawn above the bone but no hold was granted. But as the same time as his flight the male?s shoulder slammed heavily into his own, a lungful of air was lost and pain shot thought his left shoulder but he recovered well enough.
His head was beginning to swim and his left eye was almost drowning in blood but still his head continued with it?s rotation and arc to bring his unhinged jaw towards Collision. Or more specifically towards the side of his throat, at the same time his left paw slid foreword to try and hook Collision?s right so it was harder for the male to retreat and at the same time increasing his own balance. His ears were tipped back and eyes narrowed though focused on the artery on the side of the male?s neck or his windpipe. Teeth were ready to grab onto whatever he could and then tear it out if he could. They were in close quarters now and Vixe was more used to it after his childhood of wrestling with his father and siblings. Paws were spread, joints loose to lower his center of balance. Back once again arched as his stomach tucked, shoulder rolling forward to protect his neck as much as possible though his current attack left him fairly out in the open. His tail remained where it was, unable to help him in any way other then to protect his hind quarters.
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