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Mystic

Loner

age
4 Years
gender
Female
gems
23
size
Medium
build
posts
97
player
Annette
09-04-2016, 09:28 AM (This post was last modified: 09-08-2016, 05:49 PM by Mystic.)
Out-of-Character Name: Esperanza
Age: 18

Character's Name: Mystic Sorell-Savvil
Character Age: 4 years old
Season of Birth: Summer
Adult Height: 29 inches.
Appearance Description: White wolf with red eyes and black markings.
Skills: Hunting and Navigation

Proof of Purchases: Albino Pass

Mystic Ref



Shrapnel

Moderator
IT'S OVER 9000!

age
13+ Years
gender
Female
gems
18
size
Large
build
Light
posts
1
player
09-04-2016, 11:05 AM
Okay so a few things - You state that the character has black markings, but you don't really describe them. If you have a ref that would be great.
And then your character should be 4 instead of 3 and in your profile you have her as 2 so that needs to be changed as well.



Mystic

Loner

age
4 Years
gender
Female
gems
23
size
Medium
build
posts
97
player
Annette
09-04-2016, 11:36 AM
http://sta.sh/0idyiz1awhm (her ref image)



Evelyn

Loner
Fluffy Marshmallow

age
13+ Years
gender
Female
gems
123456941
size
Medium
build
-
posts
5
player
09-07-2016, 07:23 PM
Please fix everything that Shrapnel asked you to fix.

My focus needs more focus.



Mystic

Loner

age
4 Years
gender
Female
gems
23
size
Medium
build
posts
97
player
Annette
09-08-2016, 05:43 PM
Fixed



Shrapnel

Moderator
IT'S OVER 9000!

age
13+ Years
gender
Female
gems
18
size
Large
build
Light
posts
1
player
09-08-2016, 06:52 PM
Welcome to Ardent!


Congratulations on your newly accepted character! Now you may begin to play! Here are some useful links to help you along your way.

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Lil' Ardy
And the Ardent Staff