I wanna see you bleed
Once again the youth would come towards the battlefields; where she had once reigned victorious in her first fight- but there was no denying that she needed to train, and train she will. She would pull her huge mass towards the centre and pull back her crown to call for an opponent. The last time she had fought was when wolves Trespassed in Arcanum, but she could hardly call that any sort of training, especially when she had aid by her side. Meinx would wait patiently' Defenses up and her eyes scattering across the landscape in search of her own opponent. She wanted to see her father again, to do him proud, To feel as though she had done good enough for him; if that was even possible, would he ever be willing to train her?. She found it hard to keep in good contact with her father, they always seem so far away and she wanted to see him regularly, but a girl cant always get what she wanted.
OOC: Sorry for short post=[
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the youth wouldnt be kept waiting long, almost instantly another would show. But to her surprise it was someone she had met before; infact meinx and a few older Arcanum members helped take down her siblings. A smirk would tug her lips, watching carefully as the placid babe would approach. " Ah, perhaps if you didn't trespass your brother wouldn't have been so easy to take down by two wolves." Perhaps if they waited to be escorted in everything would have gone more smoothly. She would fight back a sneer, amused by the situation; though would Nephele become the victor? Meinx would shrug, before attempting to make eye contact with the little woman. " Ah well, i cant change the past, now can i?" Meinx would only let moments past before planning to set into action.
Quickly Meinx would set up her defenses- Eyes slit, ears pinned, Legs spread for balance, Hackles raised, tail tucked, muscles tenses, teeth bared, claws dug into ground for more security, legs bent slightly for quicker movement, Brows furrowed, toes spread out slightly. Quickly meinx would aim to close the distance between them head on, though hopefully as meinx nears closer She'll move slightly to the left at the last moment, Bending her legs slightly; hoping to barge her right shoulder forcefully into the right side of Nephs face, aiming near the centre/ her cheek to hopefully hurt her jaw and stun her in the process. Meinx would quickly open her jaws, hoping to grab onto Nephs scruff right at the start/ top where it'll be more thin and delicate. If meinx grabbed the scruff successfully, she'd yank her head upwards to hopefully lift Neph of the floor to make it harder for her to attack. If successful Meinx would attempt to shake her head violently to tear and hopefully hurt her neck with all the shaking.
Meinx Vs Nephele for DOMINANCE round 1 of 2
Defenses: Listed in first few sentences
Attacks: Meinx would aim to close the distance and at the last moment move slightly to the left to hopefully barge her right shoulder forcefully into Nephs right side of her face/ cheek. While doing so meinx attempts to grab right at the start of Nephs scruff to lift her of the ground to make it harder for her to attack, if successful with grabbing scruff meinx will shake her head violently to hurt neph more.
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NOTE: Meinx is nine inches taller than nephele:)
The spar would quickly be turned into one of dominance, and the youth had no reason to back out. Meinx's right shoulder hit successfully upon Neph's right cheek in the centre, which would hopefully cause some bruising and damage. Meinx had also been successful in obtaining the smaller womans scruff nearest the top, Though as meinx tried to yank it up it would seem meinx wasn't quite able to make Neph budge. Meinx would attempt to keep hold of the scruff for a little while longer, aiming to shake her crown violently and pull up in a final attempt to hurt her opponent. Quickly Meinx would lift her front right paw up, attempting to scratch it multiple times towards Nephs face, aiming to get her claws across the bridge of her nose and aiming to slash it towards Nephs right eye to irritate. As meinx had lifted her paw up she would quickly balance her weight out on all three paws, clenching claws into ground for a more stable grip, lips curled back, eyes slit, ears pinned, tail tucked, muscles tensed, knees bent very slightly, teeth bared, spine aligned, her toes would spread out slightly.
Nephele would quickly launch her own attacks, aiming to grab Meinx's neck. Due to there nine inch size difference Neph's upper jaw would land firmly just above Meinx's right shoulder blade [around an inch above], nephs lower jaw planting in the top centre of meinx's chest/bottom of neck. Meinx wouldn't think about the pain, focusing on trying to finish the fight as the victor. Neph would swipe her front right paw for Meinx's, though as meinx had lifted her paw up Neph would instead hit meinx's elbow, making Meinx slightly of balance. Quickly Meinx would plant all four paws to the ground to readjust balance, but meinx would quickly attempt to stomp her right front paw on Nepheles right front paw to attempt to brake some bones in the toes where there delicate. or at the very least bruise them. Meinx would tense her abdomen, her hackles raising. Meinx would quickly attempt one more attack to stun her opponent; the youth would let go of nephs scruff if she was successful with keeping her grip upon it. Meinx would turn her head slightly to the right; Hoping to quickly snap her teeth down on Neph's right ear at the very top to hurt and hopefully shock.
Meinx Vs Nephele For dominance Round 2 of 2
Defenses: Weight spread out, toes splayed, claws clenched for better grip, tail tucked, eyes slit, muscles tensed, teeth bared, ears pinned, lips tucked, abdomen tensed, hackles raised, knees bent slightly, spine aligned.
Attacks: Meinx would shake her head violantly once again and yank her head up in a final attempt to hurt neph. Her right paw would quickly go up- aiming to scrape on nephs face nearest the muzzle slashing towards right eye. Meinx would quickly adjust her balance, and then aim to slam her right paw down on neph's to hopefully brake the toe bones. As a final attempt meinx would let go of nephs scruff [ if she was successful with keeping the grip] and aim to bite down at the top of Nephs ear to puncture.
Other: Pm me for any confusion canti! fun and quick fight<3
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MEINX NEPHELE for DOMINANCE Round 1
MEINX: 10 for clarity- All clear 6 for powerplaying. A major conditional with Meinx's head attack, too much is assumed on her grabbing a hold of Nephele's scruff. -3 Too much movement, walking up, side stepping, shoulder thrust, bite, lift, and then shake. -2 10 for defences. eyes narrowed, ears pinned, legs spread, hackles raised, tail tucked, muscles tensed, teeth bared, claws dug into ground, legs bent, toes spread. 3 for attack. Shoulder thrust to face +2, bite +1 for too much movement and conditionals 10 for injuries.First round Round one MEINX Total: 39/50 NEPHELE: 8 for clarity- Said that she was lifted up slightly, and then said she did not leave the ground -1?...bringing her up slightly...? ?such did not make her bodice leave the ground ? Her bite was too wide and too high for a wolf 9 inches taller than her -1 10 for powerplaying. None seen 8 for defences. tail aligned with spine, narrowed eyes, ears flat, head aligned with spine, legs bent, claws dug in earth, lips snarling, hackles raised. Paws dug into ground doesn't count, should have been legs spread/balance weighed on each leg -1, core tightened doesn't count, muscles tightened would have worked -1 3 for attack. bite to the neck, too wide for a wolf 9 inches shorter +1, trying to knock Meinx's leg from under her +2 10 for injuries. major bruise on left cheek, moderate lacerations on scruff, first round though Round one NEPHELE Total: 39/50 Round 2
MEINX: 10 for clarity- all clear 4 for powerplaying. ?Quickly Meinx would plant all four paws to the ground to readjust balance,? Have to attempt this -1 ?Meinx would turn her head slightly to the right; ? Have to attempt this -1 Wayy too much movement. Head shake, pull up, scratching, paw slam, and then another bite. You need to give your partner time to react to the first movement of that limb before moving it to another attack. -4 9 for defences. balance made up for tripod stance, claws dug in earth, lips pulled back, eyes narrowed, ears pinned, muscles tenses, legs bent, toes spread, hackles raised. Spine aligned not specific enough, tail aligning or head aligning with spine would have been better -1 6 for attack. head shake and pull +1, scratching to face +2, paw slam, attempt to break toes +2, bite to ear +1, you would have gotten more points if there wasn't so much movement 8 for injuries. moderate bite to the shoulder (assessed by judge) -2 Round two MEINX Total: 37/50 NEPHELE: 8 for clarity- Some parts of the post were a bit jumbled and jumpy. Also a bit of confusion who you were talking about because of the use of ?knight? ?girl? and things like that. Try to use names more -2 8 for powerplaying.?The knight would let her head lurch back slightly? Has to be attempted -1 ?Suddenly, she would tilt her head up and she would launch up and forward.? Has to be attempted -1 7 for defences. legs bent, tail aligned with spine, toes spread, claws dug into earth, ears folded, lips curled, legs spread, eyes narrowed, hackles raised. Tripod stance not adjusted for in balance, as well as most defences relying on paws and one on ear that are currently injured -2 3 for attack. head butt +2 moderate bite to neck +1 0 for injuries.Major bite to scruff, -3 major bruising under right eye, -3 Minor lacerations from nose to right eye -1, major bite to right ear -3 Round two NEPHELE Total: 26/50 Totals:
MEINX: 76/100 NEPHELE: 65/100 And the winner is...
Meinx! Nephele must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out. Damage:
Not even gonna bother since this took so long. So sorry for the wait! Notes:
Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here) Notes For Luis Your posts were pretty clear for the most part, just lost a few points on powerplaying due to not attempting some movements. All movement has to be attempted! And watch your movement too, there was a lot of movement in those posts. Good attacks, but just way too many of them. Watch your conditionals too, like ?if I bite here I will do this and this? because it depends too much on that single move. For Canti Mostly the same here, posts were mostly clear, just try to use more names instead of fancy titles as it can cause a bit of confusion. Also a lot of powerplay problems here, every move has to be attempted, you can't move without trying to attempt it, because your opponent could try to stop the movement. - By [Evelyn]
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OOC: Great fight canti! I hope you dont mind the slight pp.
As quickly as the fight began it would soon end. They both tried to tear and wound eachother. both still had much to learn, though after all the attacks where made it was clear that meinx had proven her dominance against the Elysius princess. Power surged through her, and it was a shame that the dark pearl decided not to maim. Meinx had damaged her more, and with that thought alone she was satisfied. She would release the wench from her grasp, her tail held high above her forming a loop almost like a huskies. Meinx would fight the urge to smile, her cold gaze bore into the little woman- the Adravendi's point made extremely clear. She felt no need to spit out insults, for it would get her no where, but at last she would turn, leaving the battlefield with more battle experience. Where she would go from this point on was a mystery even to herself.
- Meinx exits-