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Syrinx

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12-03-2013, 10:33 AM



Syrinx did not take commitment lightly and he would not be so impressed (if at all) by the grovelling boy before him. He was no warrior--and the Adravendi man had half a mind to dismiss him. To let him know his body was useless was what he wanted to say, but it had not been how he was raised. He was raised to believe that anyone could become what they desired most. Anyone could become plentifully strong. Even this one--but Syrinx did not have the time to baby him when his initial steps of his empire were only beginning to form. A low smirk crossed chiseled features as he nodded his head. The silent message was ' you've pledged loyalty to me. should you forget that...I will remind you.', but the words that came forth were stronger--bolder, affirmative and giving, "You will be a medic unto my kingdom until I see fit to make use of you in another department. If you do not hold these skills I suggest you find a tutor. The useless will not last long," it was a threat and it was the truth, the truth he had been all too willing to give. Syrinx turned and the massive Arkhos made his exit.



Twotone

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12-05-2013, 10:50 AM




And that was it. Forced into a lifetime in a pack he hated with a leader he hated more working in a field he knew nothing about. He bristled at the thought. True he knew some medicine, maybe he could slip by on the skin of his teeth with what he knew and endure. For now. The day would come when the brazen wolf would meet his comeuppance when he would pay for trampling over the meek. He glared as the arkhos turned his back on him. One day he would do so hesitantly he assured himself. One day. But not this day. Not yet.

He glanced over his shoulder and took one last long look at the surrounding woods and mountains before he walked into the cold dark cave, the siblings still fighting behind him for reasons he did not understand, and said goodbye to his freedom.


-Exit Twotone-

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The Judge

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12-07-2013, 02:09 PM

Vyvienne v Sevan for Dominance/Punishment



Round 1
VYVIENNE:

10 for clarity- good

10 for powerplaying. nothing of note

10 for defenses. muscles tensed, hackles raised, jaws parted, teeth bared, eyes narrowed, ears pinned, body lowered

10 for attack. slam her right shoulder behind the girl?s left shoulder (+3), right paw lifted to pin Sevan?s left (+3), these two done simultaneously in order to stress the other shoulder (+2), jaws snapping for Sevan?s left ear (+2)

10 for injuries.First round

Round one Vyvienne Total: 50/50


SEVAN:

10 for clarity- Notes

10 for powerplaying. Notes

6 for defenses. lips curled back, ears back, eyes narrowing, hackles raised

3 for attack. Biting at the right side of Vyvienne?s face (+3), rearing to free her paw (not an actual attack, +0)

10 for injuries.First round

Round one Sevan Total: 39/50

Round 2

Vyvienne

8 for clarity- The last paragraph had a bit of confusion in it, mostly from sentence structure, not a big issue though.

10 for powerplaying. Notes

10 for defenses. muscles tense, hackles raised, jaws parted and lips peeled back, eyes narrowed, ears pinned, body lowered closer to the ground for a better center of balance. (+10)

6 for attack. Barrel her weight into Sevan to knock her over while rearing (+3), seeking the flesh of her sister?s scruff in order to yank it back awkwardly and painfully (+3)

7 for injuries. Moderate punctures on left cheek (-3)

Round two Vyvienne Total: 41/50



Sevan:

8 for clarity- A few grammatical issues in there.

10 for powerplaying. Notes

10 for defenses. eyes narrowed, ears flat against her skull, hackles raised, her legs spread out equally and bent slightly, her tail even with her spine.

3 for attack. Grabbing at her sister?s foreleg in attempt to keep from having her neck wrenched (+3)

3 for injuries. Toes broken (-4), skull scratches (-1), bite wound to scruff (-2)

Round two Sevan Total: 34/50







Totals:


Vyvienne: 91/100

Sevan: 73/100



And the winner is...


Vyvienne! Sevan must give up by either submitting, fleeing, or passing out.

Damage:


Vyvienne- Slight scarring on left cheek due to the punctures, mild swelling will be present for 2 OOC days, complete healing (minus scarring) will occur in 5 OOC days.


Sevan- Broken toes will cause a moderate limp for 5 OOC days, after which it will reduce to only a sporadic limp only seen during overexhaustion. Bite wound to scruff will swell, but will heal in approximately 4 OOC days.


Notes:



Tips for both writing, and some suggestions. (no points are deducted here)
Notes

For Muse
Good fight, nothing really to say.

For SAF
Make sure you do multiple attacks, that?s what really hurt your score.



- By [Andy]






Vyvienne


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12-10-2013, 09:56 PM
Victory was hers, sweet upon her tongue and within her chest. Vyvienne pulled back swiftly after her final attack, raising her head up proudly, a haughty display of power and dominance. ?You are mine,? she growled, no room for question within her voice. Pain lanced through the wounds upon her face, and yet she could only feel victorious. ?Don?t do it again,?she said, referring to the lip given, the direct contradiction, and any other offense that was not bluntly obvious. Gaze swept to the retreating form of her father and the stranger she?d attempted to scare off, a growl heavy in her throat.
Eyes would sweep to Meinx and Syren, gauging their reactions. ?Fix her,? she told them before she turned, hoping to depart the scene and seek out the deplorable scents that filled her caves. She would chase them off one by one, until she was left at peace with what was hers. For now it would be a difficult task, but it would only help teach her the art of war, and for that the green-eyed amazon could certainly be thankful. ?exit attempt-










Sevan

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12-16-2013, 12:33 PM



She felt herself fall to her sisters victory and her sister knew it. Jaws would release her sister, her body going limp enough for her sister to release her. A growl would rumble in response to her sisters words. For now. Things would change. And soon. With a quick sweeping glance around her, the girl noted that most of her sisters surrounded her and the brute was gone, lingering vaguely with that of her fathers. Apparently much had happened within a few minutes. She would pick herself up, favoring her broken toes. Russet bodice would shaking, freeing herself of dirt and debris. The back of her neck stung from her sisters bite, but other than that she appeared to be alright. The russet girl would linger only for a moment, giving her sisters a chance before she would turn and leave, retreating to her own little cave that she called home.

-exit unless stopped-






Santa Claws


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12-18-2013, 08:01 PM
#26


Santa Claws has added Vyvienne to the naughty list!


He has filled her stocking with 30 pieces of coal.


Merry Christmas!